I am only on chapter 10 so far, but I have not been able to stop reading already. I love the short chapters. They are just perfect. I don't get bored because of too much detail but there is just enough detail for me to be able to picture the situation. I am definitely going to continue reading. Also I really relate to the main character which definitely makes it 10x better !
Oh my gosh!!!!! I just love how there is not a single one dimensional character to this story. And the fact that Regan is flawed makes me really love her, because she could be ME; I find it much more relatable when I can admit that I would feel the same selfish things and probably make the same mistakes in her place. Can't wait to read more!!!!
Awwweeeee. No real man in his right mind could not smile at that photo. I have a feeling once that child is born reagen is going to have a personality change to the max! Motherhood makes you less selfish ^.^
Uhoh. She's alone except for Katie who I'm glad decided to go. Please update soon. I want to know what happens with Caitlyn and if John still wants anything to do with his baby.
Aww and John is not a happy camper at the moment!!! And I almost forgot about this story! I got out of the shower and I looked down at my iPod and it was like "Stop Saying That You're Sorry. Has been updated" I was YAY!!!!
Yeah. Regan is kind of a selfish bitch. I mean I definitely love how you've made her kind of the bad guy. It's different. I really enjoy this story and how you've put in a bunch of twists. I think this is a great story but maybe needs a little more detail. Keep up the good work. :)
The chapters are well written and the drama is good, but I think the main character is just a horrible person, in my mind tragedy usually makes a better person, it's really hard to sympathise with a character who comes off as horrible, unless that's what you were going for? Maybe making the story more vivid, like colours faces and sounds? Other wise it has a tendency to come out black and white, just my opinion ;]