April 28th, 2012 at 10:09pm
Stop Pretending That You're Sorry - Comments
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Two chapters a day? That's fucking awesome! This story has potential and I was wondering if you need someone to edit for you I would really like to. I do it at school for my friends because I have experience so just putting this out here for you :)April 28th, 2012 at 08:43pm
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I like this a lot. The narrator is funny, and the story seems like it's going to be better than it already is. Can't wait for more!April 28th, 2012 at 04:48pm
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^ Not sure if serious or trolling.
I'm going to choose that it's a sincere comment, despite how the lol confuses me. But the smiley face...April 28th, 2012 at 04:21pm -
I like this a lot. lol. :DApril 28th, 2012 at 04:15pm
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Well I don't know about her, but I'd totally want Anthony as my best friend. Jks. I wouldn't want that teacher as my friend though, unless he came with benefits.
Anyways, the teacher dude sounds like a nice guy. And the narrator's really funny. The plot's pretty interesting so I think it'll make for a nice read. I just wish there was a bit more detail.
Great job! <3April 28th, 2012 at 03:51am -
Two chapters in one day woo! :DApril 27th, 2012 at 07:40pm
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This story seems really interesting, I like it!April 26th, 2012 at 10:44pm
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I really quite like this, the general idea of the story seems really good and I can't wait for you to update more :)April 26th, 2012 at 10:25pm
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So the very first thing I picked up from this story was due to the image on top. This girl is seriously angry, annoyed and hurt I suppose. Those are y feelings when I saw the picture. While reading the story she did see angry. She swore an awful lot, and that worried me a little when I read because I think too much swearing in a story makes it a little juvenile, and sort of unprofessional.
I was very glad to see that the swearing toned down in the second chapter and we got a glimpse at who she really is. Despite a troubled life, she was actually interested in learning. When you said that she wished she made friends with Diane, I became very interested. I think this story is going to be a fun read when developed.April 26th, 2012 at 12:43pm -
Hello! I enjoyed reading this story. I felt like you were actually sitting next to me and recounting your life. I can't wait to read more!April 26th, 2012 at 03:20am
But seriously, what crawled up Anthony's ass and died...? He's such a douche canoe.
Can't wait to read more. :)