Stop Pretending That You're Sorry - Comments

  • let_it_be.

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    ...I was serious.......... O__O ....

    But seriously, what crawled up Anthony's ass and died...? He's such a douche canoe.

    Can't wait to read more. :)
    April 28th, 2012 at 10:09pm
  • dreamer4life247

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    Two chapters a day? That's fucking awesome! This story has potential and I was wondering if you need someone to edit for you I would really like to. I do it at school for my friends because I have experience so just putting this out here for you :)
    April 28th, 2012 at 08:43pm
  • Untold Story

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    I like this a lot. The narrator is funny, and the story seems like it's going to be better than it already is. Can't wait for more!
    April 28th, 2012 at 04:48pm
  • Hardly.Harley

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    ^ Not sure if serious or trolling.

    I'm going to choose that it's a sincere comment, despite how the lol confuses me. But the smiley face...
    April 28th, 2012 at 04:21pm
  • let_it_be.

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    I like this a lot. lol. :D
    April 28th, 2012 at 04:15pm
  • aubree james.

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    Well I don't know about her, but I'd totally want Anthony as my best friend. Jks. I wouldn't want that teacher as my friend though, unless he came with benefits.

    Anyways, the teacher dude sounds like a nice guy. And the narrator's really funny. The plot's pretty interesting so I think it'll make for a nice read. I just wish there was a bit more detail.

    Great job! <3
    April 28th, 2012 at 03:51am
  • Gred-and-Forge

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    Two chapters in one day woo! :D
    April 27th, 2012 at 07:40pm
  • broken bells

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    This story seems really interesting, I like it!
    April 26th, 2012 at 10:44pm
  • Gred-and-Forge

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    I really quite like this, the general idea of the story seems really good and I can't wait for you to update more :)
    April 26th, 2012 at 10:25pm
  • Monroe;

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    So the very first thing I picked up from this story was due to the image on top. This girl is seriously angry, annoyed and hurt I suppose. Those are y feelings when I saw the picture. While reading the story she did see angry. She swore an awful lot, and that worried me a little when I read because I think too much swearing in a story makes it a little juvenile, and sort of unprofessional.

    I was very glad to see that the swearing toned down in the second chapter and we got a glimpse at who she really is. Despite a troubled life, she was actually interested in learning. When you said that she wished she made friends with Diane, I became very interested. I think this story is going to be a fun read when developed.
    April 26th, 2012 at 12:43pm
  • Eternal Dreamer

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    Hello! I enjoyed reading this story. I felt like you were actually sitting next to me and recounting your life. I can't wait to read more!
    April 26th, 2012 at 03:20am