Puppet - Comments

This was amazing! It's so well-written, the layout is beautiful & the characters are amazing! I came here from Comment Swap and you have left me wanting to read more of your writing! I am definitely going to recommend this! January and Olivia are both so unique, this story was amazing! Only a few minor mistakes, but still completely amazing! :)

Holy…talk about a powerful story. I loved the detailing, and it was very sadistic, January was a powerful voice with control and Olivia the submissive character. I have never read a story quite like it and can honestly say one of the best short stories I’ve read in quite a long while. Great job, keep up the amazing writing!

This story gave me chills, it was very well written. I like the idea, too; the fact that it's orignial is always something I admire in writers. You gave just enough background information to get a real sense of the character, and how ill she is. I really like how you personified January, and how you showed the relationship between the two.

My only criticism is that I did see a few spelling/ grammar erros. But only a few.

Otherwise, I think this story is great and it's written wonderfully. Well done, and good luck in your future writing!

Woooooaaaah.
I just...
That was so twisted! It gave me paranoia! I swear I just felt something touch my leg! ):
Seriously though, it's beautifully written, the story line is obviously amazing! The characters are believeable. And if we're being honest, January is shit scary. I actually love the layout. And the name January!!!!! It's so unique!!!!

Did I mention that something just touched my leg? :/
This story is pure amazingness...

This is really interesting. My initial idea when reading the summary was that it was an abusive romantic relationship, but the fact that he's imaginary adds a whole new level to it. You certainly know how to make things creepy, and it's very effective.

It's fantastic. January being a demonic and overbearing force behind Olivia at all times is great, especially since she doesn't know what he looks like even because he's always perceived as being behind her. It gives it an even more horrifying and a demonic-protector feel to the story. The words are nicely written and flow.

Oh my Lord, that was incredible! A bit disturbing, but that's what I love :) Seriously, that makes me frightened to have in imaginary friend now, especially one like January, just intense. I feel bad for the poor girl, sheesh. I totally loved it though. You did an amazing job.