well, i found this via comment swap. i really like the layout, but what i don't understand is if this is based off a true story, or the movie john tucker must die. i like your writing style, but i think your characters are overreacting. if i was writing the story, i'd say a girl fucked him three days ago, not a girl gave him a handjob. and i think its sort of unrealistic that she freaked out just because he stood her up. possibly he does something worse?
June 29th, 2012 at 09:34am