Code Name: JTMD - Comments

well, i found this via comment swap. i really like the layout, but what i don't understand is if this is based off a true story, or the movie john tucker must die. i like your writing style, but i think your characters are overreacting. if i was writing the story, i'd say a girl fucked him three days ago, not a girl gave him a handjob. and i think its sort of unrealistic that she freaked out just because he stood her up. possibly he does something worse?

So is this based on a true story or on the movie JTMD?

So I didn't spot any errors in the first chapter, and it was quite interesting, so good job.

The only thing I have to say is just be careful to not get too detailed or anything, since you've only rated it PG13.

I love it!! PLease update sooN! :)

Donovan is a bastard. The main character is a kick- ass chick(: The summary really drew me in to the story. I can't wait to hear more(: The layout is lovely and the story flows nicely.

<3 I love this, the layout was amazing and so was the story. The summery was perfect because it really drew me in made me want to read it. The only thing that I would like to sugest is to make the writing bigger because people like me with horriby eyes have to squint to read it. :) Keep writing because it was great

Layout:

Okay, to be honest, I love the layout. I opened the comment tab before even reading the first line of the story because I just had to get the love for this layout out. Now after reading the summery, the story's theme definitely matches the layout.

Content:

This is based on a true story? Sounds... unfortunate? Anyways, the first chapter made me laugh because of the three lines-

“So much boobs!”

“You’re such a squid.”

“Porn is amazing!”

Anyways, I like stories like this because it's not just your stereotypical romance story. Though there was one or two grammatical errors, there is definitely potential. The character seems like she could be relatable in a sense, aside from her situation.

Loved it so far! JTMD is my favorite movie, so I'm sure I'm going to love this as well :) and the fact that this is based on a true story...oh snap :P

More soon!!!

This story is going to be badass. I like it. I have a feeling Gena is going to kick some ass! The Summary is great.

Omg like NO NO! I just subscribed because this story seems like it's going to be so badass. I couldn't even wait until you commented on my story first. Like omg. Gena is taking charge of this shit. XDD On a more calmer note, I am totally in love with the summary XD haha, omg. Like not even. Please continue this! c: