Love Through a Lens - Comments

Love the update! I like the KC plotline, but it's also nice to hear about other parts of her life. Good job.

Once again, excellent job, dear. I love the way you've shown the effect this obsession has on other aspects of her life. Keep it up - you're spectacular.

This is amazing. I absolutely adore your language and your description. I feel like I can really picture the situation and the characters' settings.

And I love that you include all of the aspects of the photograph that bring out the best in your character KC. Instead of your character just gushing over how hot this guy is, I like that she is admiring the aspects of the photograph. That's wonderful and really different! And I love that her photographs make her so well-acquainted to KC. Like she knows his emotions, but at the same time doesn't know him.

I adore your phrase "he was a dream in sepia." I adore all the language in your story, but that phrase is beautiful and has a nice sound to it.

I am totally subscribing! I can't wait until you update. This story is just so perfect. No spelling errors or grammar errors that I caught. And this story is written beautifully!

This story is beautiful and gah! I'm in love with it.
It's amazing and so well written.
The plot is so original and incredible.

This is a promising story. Your style is good--the sentences aren't overly long, the characters aren't overly stereotypical, and the imagery is splendid. You would need a good sense of imagery to capture a story revolving around photography. I like this. I think it would be nice if it didn't turn out to be the romance it promises, but either way the style is enough to keep me reading for a while yet. Do more descriptions of photos as things go along--I think it could be an interesting way of protraying the mood of each chapter. As things get darker or lighter or mysterious, let the photos she takes of KC be an indicator. It would be an (as far as I know) undone device.

It's quite short but it already says what it needs to say.

Can't quite explain it really well though.

Anyways, I think Valerie is smitten with K.C. But that's just the romantic in me.
I like how she observes K.C from afar. She's different, you know.

I would really like to see more of this.

Wow. I'm not sure where this story is going, which is novel for stories here lately. I like it - update soon.

this looks really good. I love how the chapters are short, but I can picture each and every photo that she has taken. c:
I'd love know if this could happen in real life. I hope that KC and her will get to know each other soon and maybe I'll get to know more about her as well! Look forward to more and I will be subscribing!

Nice. The imagery is awesome, and I'm really excited for where it's going!

Excellent chapter, love. Update quickly - I can't wait to read the next one.

I really like this story. I like the language you used,its perfect wording. The chapters are really short though,maybe try and make them a bit longer?

I like this story. The picture is pretty, but from the first two chapters it seems misleadingly soft and pretty. I have the feeling that it's going to be a bit darker, b/c her behavior does seem a bit odd. I like the use of language you use, though, and I'm excited to see you writing again.

This sounds like is gonna be really great! I subscribed so look forward to more of my comments :)