Reality Like a Dream - Comments

I got this story from comment swap so I obviously hadn't read the first story, because of this I have no idea who the characters are and I confused myself at first because I failed to notice that this was a sequel! I liked the way you explain what each character had done in the last two years because it's an insight for someone like me who hasn't read the prequel.

I absolutely love this story! and the prequel :)
Jeff Dunham is also one of my favorites, he's hilarious!
please update soon :)

At first I was like, "Whata going on," and then I was like "Oh, this is a sequel," So I read "Make My Dream A Reality", and I got hooked. It took me forever to finish, but it was worth it and Im very excited that you began a sequel, please update soon!

Alright, soooo...I got this story on comment swap. I honestly know NOTHING about the characters. Still, I like how it's written. If this was the start of a new story, I'd really like the whole mystery of it all. I do wish I knew more about the characters. Maybe throw in a flashback or something in the first chapter? Anywho, keep up the good work!

So, I got this story on comment swap and since it would take me forever to read the prequel AND this to comment I decided to read the first couple chapters of the prequel and comment on this one. I like it a lot. It's really well written and it keeps me wanting to read more! :)

My only issue with this story is that you don't know what's going on. Even though it is a sequel, you should include hints at who the characters are and what their purpose in the story is. Using flashbacks, for example, would be a good way to get that information in. Have you ever started a series with the second book? If not, then you should know that everything would still make sense in the story even if there are things the reader doesn't know completely about. You should write a sequel as a separate book with the same characters and plot, not as an add-on to the first book in fast forward. Good ideas, though, I like it! Keep it up, and keep improving!

It's a great story, I really like it! You did really well with description. I'm totally team John Cena (: I like him a bit. I like your writing style and the dialogue is good from what I can tell already. Def going to subscribe! Please update as soon as possible!

I would just also like to say that even though I don't know that characters because I'm not in this fandom or a fan of the characters that you did a marvelous job at describing them just enough that I could tell what their personalities are like and how they act towards each other makes me "awwww" sometimes it's just so cute. I hope you update soon. :)

I didn't think I would like this at first but now that I'm reading it I want more! :)

I have to admit, I didn't read the prequel because well... I'm a rebel. But holy freaking jesus christ on a unicorn, JOHN CENA?!?!?!?!?!!? Oops. I just really, really, really like him okay. :') I really didn't like the beginning of the first chapter BUT only because the tense of it. I find it hard for me to read stuff that is like "this, this, this and this happened". I love this story though. Just, so much. I can't wait to read more!

This is for the comment swap.

I didn't read the prequel so I don't know the back story. And I definitely don't know who Jordan is. However I must say that I like how you go through what's happening to them in the beginning of the story and not just jumped right in into the story about their new life as a newly wed. So, it gives me a little idea about the prequel and the characters.

I like how you wrote about these two main characters. They're sweet and I can feel their love. Your writing style is good.

Not familiar with the characters in this at all but it almost didn't matter because it was so well written! I quite like your writing style and the way you formulate your sentences and Jean's dress in chapter 3 is gorgeous! xx

loved the prequel and I'm loving this sequel already! i cannot wait to read more! update soon please (: