All or Nothing - Comments

I don't get why he's being an idiot about this and not letting her explain-.- daaaaamn, I miss them together:-( ah I love this story, glad you updated. I really don't like kaicey, she needs to gooooo heh:3

damn I'm more convinced than ever that Hunter, Jocelyn and Kaicey are working together - and now that fucking douche Brian is hooking up with the whore :-( Hunter deserves to have his dick cut off and force fed to him, Kaicey needs to be run over by a bus and Brian needs to be kicked in the balls for being such an idiot.

Annisa sounds really cool though and I'm glad that she's come into the story. I'm kind of tempted to want to have Eliza tell Brian to take a fucking hike when he does come crawling back coz god knows what the hell diseases he's picked up from Kaicey

Cliffhanger much ;) pleasee update fast :)

Sorry about the super long comment... I just have a lot of feelings.... :D

How do I put this nicely... WHAT THE FLYING FUCK?! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME WOMAN! I HAVE FEELINGS ABOUT THIS STORY AND THE CHARACTERS WITHIN IT! Oh my god someone better go and kick Brian's motherfucking ass from California to fucking New Jersey! What the actual fuck?! And don't even get me started on Jocelyn and Hunter and that fucking whore Kaicey! Here's what I would do if I were Eliza, kick Hunter out of the band because he's a dick, get rid of Jocelyn because she's clearly an scheming little bitch, punch Kaicey in the face because she needs to keep her motherfucking legs shut and as for my dear little Bri-Bri, make him get on his motherfucking knees and grovel till she takes him back, and then possibly have Matt come in and beat him up for being a complete and utter tool for jumping to conclusions. Don't get me wrong, I love this story and this chapter is amazing. You're a brilliant writer and I love how you put this whole obstacle thing into the story, it's wonderful. I am quite literally on the edge of my seat so please update as fast as humanly possible otherwise I shall die from cliffhanger-itis. That is all :)
xxx

I already love Annisa. And no...I can't believe that bullshit! Jocelyn shouldn't have said what she did; Hunter's ass needs to be gone; and, well, I still can't stand Kaicey. lol.

A bumpy ride? I'm ready! BRING IT ON! :-)

I love Annisa, she certainly seems to be the friend that Eliza is going to need through this time, especially now with this new revelation Jocelyn wasn't slow to point out to her. And Brian...Kaicey? Really? Nice choice! Something tells me she's in on this little joyride to bring Eliza down, and I hope Eliza realises just what's going on quickly enough before even more damage is done.
Wonderful update once again, can't wait for the next one! xxx

OH SHIT

What.the.fucking.hell.

Yeah, you know, I'm starting to think those two bitches are working with each other. What the hell man?
Lord.

holy hell I'd almsot swear that Hunter and Kaicey are working together. Damn Brian you huge fucking dick - could you at least have let her speak. Didn't her slapping Hunter tell you anything????

OK, she's gotta kick that fucker out of the band

Oh my god! Hunter is such an asshole! I know this is all part of some fucked up plan to bring Eliza down, and obviously Brian is unaware of that but for crying out loud...he should have listened to reason, and what Eliza had to say instead of just storming off the way he did. God I hope they sort this out and soon. Fantastic chapter, can't wait for the next one!! xx

Hunter is a dick! And you would think after everything, Brian would actually listen to Eliza rather than just jumping to conclusions and believing what he THINKS he's seeing. Didn't he learn his lesson last time, after believing a bunch of shit he heard and saw that wasn't true???? GAH! He infuriates me!

But I loved it and really want the next chapter...now?

Brian and Eliza have been through enough shit with each other you would think that they would just stop and listen to what the other one has to say. He wouldn't even let her talk. Anywasys loved the chapter. Cant wait for more! I hope they talk and he listens to her and they make up.

No! Why why why.

Nooo Get rid of Hunter he is an asshole. Have her go back to Cali and be with Brian :(

Dude! That Halloween chapter was awesome! Can't wait to read the next one!!

I started reading Right Here Waiting on a whim yesterday and couldn't stop, and then hopped straight on to the sequel today. I love Eliza and Brian together, and they way you write is fantastic, I can actually see it all playing out in my head. I love it!
This chapter was great, and now that Brian has slipped up and accidentally planted one on Kaicey that can only mean there's going to be some troublesome times ahead. I can't wait for the next chapter now :) xx

It was awesome! And...I actually know three girls who were Alice, the Queen of Hearts, and the Cheshire Cat for Halloween last year. lol.

Can't wait for the next one. I hope someone punches Kaicey in the face soon.

oh lord that line "You'll be buried in my treasure" is just awesome and I can just picture Brian standing there slack jawed with lust :-)

Damn Kaicey is just getting even more annoying - she's like a dog desperately trying to hump his leg

Omg, I love when she said "You'll be buried in my treasure." haha,you always have like "witty" things to write hehe :D