that was amazing... Im alot more interested. how are our main leads related to the other stuff going on??
Im a bit confused now but I think you'll clear it up soon. its like a parallel of the past and present I think? but its not confusing in the way I don't understand, so don't worry. its still easy to get whats going on. Im just really keen to see how you tie everything up.
I love the way you wrote Deimos, it made me smile.
I cant wait to see what happens when he meets Psyche :D
yikessss why did he go all weird-ish when she said her name? :O
I can't wait to see the mystery behind that. I like that line "can't you just stop ignoring me all together?" hahaha I can only imagine how frustrated he was
I like the new layout too!!! I know how long to take to fiddle with. They are so frustrating for me to work on. I also love this chapter. The banter between our two leads is adorbs.
I'm thinking he meant Kate Winslet and Leonardo da Caprio? ;) I enjoyed this chapter. Erik is such a brat. It was nice that he tried to help her out with her test. It makes me wonder why she's so bad at history. Hmmmmm.....
You seriously don't have to redo it! I loved that chapter. <3 <3 It was so sweet that he helped her at the diner. Waitressing is hard work. I was one for a little bit at an understaffed little place. Grumpy old people are the worst. I too struggle with chapter length, but I thought you did lovely.
Good chapter!! Long, which I sometimes have difficulty with. You didn’t bore my socks off though. I wanted to read more. I'm still very interested to see what happens. Who is our mystery man.