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  • Meronean

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    Just read chapter 7!! Loved it and I'm sorry for being painfully slow to catch up. I'll ready 8 soon. :)
    October 26th, 2015 at 01:37am
  • crimson rose

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    that was amazing... Im alot more interested.
    how are our main leads related to the other stuff going on??

    Im a bit confused now but I think you'll clear it up soon. its like a parallel of the past and present I think? but its not confusing in the way I don't understand, so don't worry. its still easy to get whats going on. Im just really keen to see how you tie everything up.

    I love the way you wrote Deimos, it made me smile.

    I cant wait to see what happens when he meets Psyche :D
    October 11th, 2015 at 03:09am
  • crimson rose

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    yikessss why did he go all weird-ish when she said her name? :O

    I can't wait to see the mystery behind that. I like that line "can't you just stop ignoring me all together?" hahaha I can only imagine how frustrated he was
    October 9th, 2015 at 09:14am
  • crimson rose

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    I like it too :)

    erik is so cocky and smug ahhh I love him already
    October 6th, 2015 at 08:29am
  • Meronean

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    I like the new layout too!!! I know how long to take to fiddle with. They are so frustrating for me to work on.
    I also love this chapter. The banter between our two leads is adorbs.

    In Love
    October 6th, 2015 at 05:16am
  • Meronean

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    I'm thinking he meant Kate Winslet and Leonardo da Caprio? ;)
    I enjoyed this chapter. Erik is such a brat. It was nice that he tried to help her out with her test. It makes me wonder why she's so bad at history. Hmmmmm.....
    October 5th, 2015 at 12:43am
  • crimson rose

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    Im only on the second chapter but I really like it so far :)
    October 2nd, 2015 at 10:36am
  • Meronean

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    You seriously don't have to redo it! I loved that chapter. <3 <3
    It was so sweet that he helped her at the diner. Waitressing is hard work. I was one for a little bit at an understaffed little place. Grumpy old people are the worst. Grmml
    I too struggle with chapter length, but I thought you did lovely.
    October 1st, 2015 at 03:37am
  • Meronean

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    So, our main man is Cupid? Interesting turn of events. Very Happy
    September 28th, 2015 at 04:57am
  • Meronean

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    Good chapter!! Long, which I sometimes have difficulty with. You didn’t bore my socks off though. I wanted to read more. Wink
    I'm still very interested to see what happens. Who is our mystery man.
    September 25th, 2015 at 12:37am
  • mekatmuse

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    If you write it, I will read it. But seriously you have piqued my interest and I look forward to more.
    September 23rd, 2015 at 09:58pm
  • Meronean

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    Well, I'm interested. If you post more I will read it. Your writing style is very pretty! :)
    September 22nd, 2015 at 03:07pm