Wow, that was hot! Haha, you nailed it. I know that when I write my smut scenes I always feel like there is something missing but damn, you got it right there.
I really do wonder what goes on in peoples minds and I wonder where this story is going to lead because at the moment, to me it is unclear. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
So uh... sex. Yeah. That didn't turn me on in the least bit. Nope. No lady boners here. Fuck who am I kidding that was fucking hot. And nothing? Not even a little bit? Darn. Well, in that case, you're lucky I'm patient. Speaking of Johnny, will that little Leprechaun come back later? I love that little dude x)
So far so good, my computer hasn't been chucked out the window yet, and once again I'm procrastinating from doing my school work to read your updates. XD
However, I'm now convinced that what Gerard is lying about has something to do with Brendon, and I've also decided that I don't know if that's a good thing or not. If Brendon comes back, what's going to happen to Zacky? D:
Guess I'll just have to wait and find out. I can't wait for the next chapter. ♥♥♥
Awww... Francins! She's so adorable. I have a nephew who's 8 months old. And I went to see him two weeks ago. When I had to leave, I just felt like I wanna bring him along with me. So, I do understand Zacky's sadness on leaving Francis.
It's a very hot chapter and yeay! Mikey, you better be ready for round two as well and other rounds if both of you feel up to it. *wink* ^_^
But, you know what I hate? I hate when Mikey's comparing Zacky and Brendon. Like, he compares the way Zacky and Brendon show their love. He even compares how their penises look. I mean, come on, Mikey! They're two different people. Stop comparing. If Zacky knows you think of Brendon while the two of you are having sex, that would really hurt his feeling. Be more considerate, will you?
Anyways, when you put it that you don't think the ending would not be like how people imagine it, I almost had a panic attack. What's gonna happen now? What are you gonna do? Are you gonna fake more deaths? WHAT?! -_-" So, my version of the ending would be something like this :
So, Mikey soon finds out that Ryan and Brendon are still alive. Then, Mikey somehow joins the gang as well. And Ryan dies in a brawl or something. And because he's gay, he doesn't have a successor so, Mikey becomes his successor. -_-" I know. I think too much but... whatever.
As usual, your update makes me very, very happy. ^_^
Why, Gee?? Why must you lie to your brother?? Hmmm I wonder if theya re all int he same mob as each other!! Ahahaha, I just....this is making me think!! Anya, you make me think too much!! I seriously can't wait to see where this is going and I bet you he knew Kyle, Zacky's ex!! These are just assumptions though!!! Ooo Bishop Seward is lying too....maybe they need to be hush hush and were told so by Brendon and Ryan, so that Mikey doesn't find out! I don't know, but what I do know is that these questions are just going to keep coming!!! lol, I just can't wait to read more!!! Ugh!! This story, it needs to be updated like right now!!
Of course I remember the last story, how can I not? I guess I'll have to make do with awkward sex scene rather than none at all. ^_^
My heart continues to beat wildly as my lungs struggle, unused to exercise that doesn’t involve Zacky’s body. LOL! Mikey, I know what kind of exercise you do that involves Zacky's body. *wink* I had a quick perverted moment for a while there. =p
Erm... is Zacky keeping a secret from Mikey too? Or, does Brendon or Ryan or whoever else do a background check on Zacky? Or, is Gerard's mystery Pretty person knows Zacky's past? Or, just... my head is running a hundred miles per hour and I just can't sort out my thoughts right now. Main point is, this story is AMAZING!
There are just so many unanswered questions and I just want them answered now!
You already have the ending in mind? What's gonna happen? Ah, well, I know you won't answer that but you can't blame a girl for trying. ^_^
Anyway, amazing update as usual and I'll try not to get too frustrated with all those unanswered questions in my head.
Ohhh, I thought maybe you meant like changing the entire thing and such, I was scared haha. Well let me know if it's ever published or anything, I'd definitely buy a copy. :) And as for comments on this chapter, it was so good omfg. I nearly screamed when Mikey saw brendon.
True, but the drama in sinners (well that was more Ryan's fault) but still..anyone could cause it and you just aren't telling :) Was it Brendon he saw?! Will they get back together?! (so many important questions) :P
Enjoy the hyper-ness!!!! Im loving the story! the suspence of whats going on with Grerard is killings me(Thats how you know that the suspence is great when its got the readers on the edge of their seats) Keep writing and I'll keep reading!!
Sometimes, I feel like throwing my computer out my window. I have a paper to write for school, so today has been one of those days. And then, I just so happened to get on Mibba, and even though I told myself "Amy, you will not check your subscriptions. You have a paper to write dammit!" As you can tell, I obviously didn't listen to myself, but the fact that you updated this story makes my procrastination sooooo worth it. I love this story, and I can't wait to see how all this shit plays out. I hope Mikey really did see Brendon, and I hope Gerard has a damn good reason for being a dirty little liar about... whatever it is he's lying about to Mikey. Annnnyways, I"m going to write my paper now, Update again soon, yes? Wish me luck resisting the urge to throw my computer out the window. I love this story ♥♥♥
Oh my god. Johnny fucking Seward the fucking bishop. That is too great xD (I see whatcha did there...Johnny Christ. xD ) So....What the fuck is up with Gerard. Acting shady is putting it lightly. I have an odd feeling he's involved with Ryan but, really, who isn't involved with Ryan? And is Frank coming back? I hope Frank's back. And, I'm guessing this isn't Zee and Mikey's last day in Jersey. I really Really REALLY hope that was Brendon standing on the street. He and Mikey need to see each other again without Ryan freaking the fuck out.