Saviours - Comments

This sucks. Not the story but this feeling sucks. It sucks to see Zacky so heart broken and even though I'm angry at Mikey most of the time but I kinda understand where he's coming from. Gosh! This is so frustrating! Just... why? Both Brendon and Zacky are important. Brendon made Mikey who he is today. If he hadn't met Brendon, Mikey wouldn't really find himself and he would forever be that goody two shoes kid unless he met someone else who's not as fucked up as Brendon but that would be a total different story.

And then he met Zacky and he helped to pull Mikey out of the dark time and Mikey is a lot happier now even though he still can't really forget Brendon. I think I know why Mikey can't tell Zacky the 'L' word. Mikey just couldn't let go. He confessed his love to Brendon once and he got hurt. And now Zacky came and made his life wonderful but he's just not ready. And in my own opinion, I think the other reason that Mikey can't say it is because he just can't let go. He's afraid that if he admits to himself that he loves Zacky, he would lose his grip on Brendon's memory. He's holding on so tightly to Brendon that Mikey just doesn't know how to let go. Am I making any sense right now?

Oh my God! I just got so emotional with this chapter. T.T

Is Pretty Frank? It's Frank isn't it? I know it's Frank. Let it be Frank.

I always have too many things to say every time I read the update and most of the time I have more to add as soon as I posted my first comment. There are just so many things to say and I'm not typing fast enough and my thoughts disappear the moment I want to write the down. That kinda sucks.

I love it when the author can't really comment on my comment on their story because they don't want to be a spoiler because somehow I think that I’m getting close.

Just get to the good part already. All this drama is killing me. I hate dramas. Okay I lied. Everyone loves drama but seriously it's killing me. Make these boys live happily ever after. No more sad stuff. -_-"

I guess I'll stop for now. Update soon?

Eh, I calmed down. Sorry 'bout that. x)
Dude. This chapter made me want to cry. I feel so bad for Zacky ): Still a bit angry with Mikey though, but I guess I understand how he's feeling x)

Awwwwh, maybe Mikey can start to love Zacky?? I know that Zack deserves to be happy and who is this pretty that Francis is talking about? What is going on?? This chapter leaves me with a lot of questions and I can't wait to see where this is going.!! I need another update as soon as possible! UGH!

i hope Pretty is Frankie :) <3 as usual , you're great!

I applaud you right back! Ik like how you're showing Mikey is still dealing with some important stuff. I'm going to admit I don't like Brendon. While yes he helped Mikey grow in many positives ways he also scarred him. It's hard to feel good enough when your first love treated you like second best.

I'm sobbing okay, this chapter was perfect and I'm just going to sit here crying for the rest of the night.

I just want you to know how much I cried reading this. I usually reread the end of the last chapter first and that's where it all started. I absolutely loved it though. I can't wait to read the next part-I'm tingling in anticipation-because I know it's going to be fantastic. I have no idea what you're going to do next but I hope it's full of drama and feelings! :]

God fucking damnit fucking Mikey Way jesus fuck why can't you just fucking love Zacky and be fucking happy and fucking FUCK. The kid is never pleased! Aggghh so many feels.
But then, if the first love of my life was blown up, but not really, I'd want to go find him again too BUT IT DOESN'T MEAN YOU HAVE TO FUCKING LEAVE ZACKY MICHAEL GOD DAMNIT.
Fuck. Okay. I had to rant. Mikey's pissing me off in this chapter.

Ooh, , I feel honored :D And the layout maker was fixed last time I checked it But that's fine, plain layout, fancy layout... it's all the same to me.

But Yes, poor Zacky. And stupid Mikey >< He's going to be stupid, isn't he? He's going to go out searching for Brendon and... dammit Mikey, YOU WERE HAPPY!!! But it makes sense. Everything going through his mind makes sense, even if it's infuriating xD

The bit about Kyle's picture being gone, I was picturing Zacky being like, "Biiiiitch you don't know mah life! *sassy snap*" Yeah xD Obviously Zacky's black now.

So... that's all for now xD I look forward to the next installment!

Nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I swear to god nu more depressing >.<!!!!! If they break up I want sex first!

I really do love this story, I get excited every time I get an update notification. Mikey has such a tragic life story, it's really sad how it's affecting him mentally and emotionally. I definitely feel for Zacky in this chapter. He put all of his feelings out there, he's being so good to Mikey and Mikey can't even fulfill one request which should be so simple considering their history and how much they obviously care about each other.

GR8! as usual!
You have some sort of magic writing skill. you're great!

It seems zacky is truly ready to commit to mikey and that scares Mikey. Maybe Mikey thinks Zacky is going to attempt to replace Brendon' memory. If that makes sense . . . What I do know is that Mikey is not over Brendon.

Oh, shit, this is so brilliant!

I still have a few things to say that I forgot to mention in the first comment. ^_^

So the only reason that Mikey is still comparing Brendon and Zacky is because obviously Mikey still hadn't forgotten about Brendon. And that kinda sucks. I had this crazy speculation in my head that maybe Zacky is Brendon. He had a plastic surgery on his whole body to completely change his identity. But that's obviously impossible. They have different voices and Mikey obviously remember how Brendon voice is. So my speculation can go down the drain.

The reason that Zacky had removed Kyle's picture and replaced it with the picture of him and Mikey is a proof that Zacky is serious now. Zacky had moved on and I think it's kinda like a hint for Mikey to start moving on too. I don't know. It's all in my head.

Mikey needs to sort out his thoughts. If he keeps being like this, he'll be just like Brendon. In Sinners, Brendon loved Ryan but he wanted Mikey. In the end he ended up hurting all three of them and Mikey hurt the most. Same thing goes here. In the end, Zacky will be the one hurting the most. I remember reading Mercy by Jodi Piccoult. I can't remember the exact quote but one of the characters said in a relationship, there's always a person that loves more that the other. Like 60-40 or 70-30. There's always that one person who's the one giving their heart fullest to the other while the other is not fully there. I know I'm quoting it badly and I hope you do understand what I'm trying to tell you. So my point is, it's obvious that Zacky is the one more serious in this relationship than Mikey. So if Mikey does decide to leave Zacky, it would hurt him really badly. Yeah, Mikey would hurt too but not as bad as Zacky.

I'm rambling a little too much again, ain't I? LOL! I'll stop here. Update soon? ^_^

I love you...

I feel like that's a really creepy way to start a comment, but oh well! :P

Anywho, I really do love you, and you're writing, and this story, and I'm just alkjhdfklajsdfhkl! I need to know what happens! Are Mikey and Zacky broken up now?! D: I hateeeee cliffhangers! (Unless I'm the one writing them of course lol)

I'm moving in exactly nine days, and I don't know if I'll have internet for a while after I move, so it would really make my life if you could update again before I leave? Pretty please? :)

I can't wait for the next chapter. :D

Oh my, my, my. Poor Zacky.
But please don't let Mikey and Brendon get back together.
I beg of you.
Don't do it.

It doesn't matter if it's short or if it's too depressing. You updated and that's what matters! ^_^

I had to go back to Sinners and read the last few chapters to remind myself on how Mikey and Zacky met. ^_^

You know. I have this stupid thought. I think Zacky was the one who involved in a gang and his boyfriend got caught up in it and was murdered by none other than Ryan's own gang. So that's how Gerard knew about Zacky's past. It couldn't really be a coincident that Zacky has the same past as Mikey when they first met, isn't it? Well, it's a fiction so anything can happen. I'm just trying to be logic. ^_^ I tend to do that a lot.

“Your past made you who you are today. Brendon and your parents, your faith. All of it, the good and the bad, turned you into the man I love. No amount of nightmares and scars will ever change that.”

Well said, Zacky. If someone said something like that to me, I would melt like a cheese on a hot pan. ^_^ I'm being hyper right not but whatever.

Don't change your writing style just to trick me. I'm having fun picking up on all the details. I love it when I'm right. I guess everyone's like that.

Bahahaha, yes I did change it :P!! I needed a change and well oh my gosh!!! He can't say those words and he is going to hurt Zacky when Zacky did so much for him!! What the hell is going on??? I neeed to knowwwwwwww!!! Ugh and well sometimes you have to have these kind of chapters to even get anywhere!!! Update as soon as you can!! I love your stories!!

Bahahahahah!! I knwo you can't answer my question, I love asking those that reveal things!! Anyways, yes this is a little late. I've been lazy and trying to read and comment, everything that I can!! I really loved this chapter, Mikey and Zacky are so cute together!! I just..I know there is drama to come and I really just can't wait to read more of this glorious story!!