Saviours - Comments

My emotions... I... I can't even... How do I... What do I...

Someone hold me?

(please?)

No words describe how im feeling right now. Oh wait, flabbergasted. That works.

oh wow, this is such a gripping story. I love Ryan as the bad guy, but what on earth has Mikey gotten himself into? And what about poor Zacky back in Vegas?

ugh. Are you trying to kill me? I just...ugh. All I have to say is that Ryan is an ass, and I love you for sticking with this story. I hope you know you've ruined my dinner though, because I was too caught up in this and I let it overcook x)

But, if I haven't said it already, congratulations on your novel dear! I think it's amazing that you're getting published (: And knowing your writing, I'm sure they'll love it :D

All the mind fucks.... Update soon because Mikey and Zacky can't break up but Mikey can't leave new York

WOW!!!!! Ive missed this story!!! So glad youre back and I hope your novel is goes well!!!! I LOVE this story!!!!! Ryan is kinda scaring me at the moment though! I hope that Mikey doesnt hurt Zacky!!! I love him so much!!! What will happen is he stay in New York?!?!?! Him and Zacky need to be together and safe!!!!
Love it all!!!! Update soon :D :D

HOLY CRAP ON A STICK! I just died.. that honestly gave me chills! Ryan is till as freaking scary as ever and my insides were quivering just reading that! But what about Zacky?? he is my love and he is Mikey's new love and he needs to be there with him to help make everything alright again! Brendon is a brat and Ryan is scary and Gerard is kinda a douche and Mikey just needs Zacky there with him! ahhh update soonn! <3

Love it! <3 please update soon :)

Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh. My. God. This was perfect ahhhh. I've waited so long or this to update. It's my favorite fic omg and you didn't disappoint at all. It was flawless and I'm happy yet terrified that Ryan is back in the picture. Eager to see how mikey takes Ryan demanding he stay in New York.

And we have Ryan back in the picture! What is going to happen! I think that maybe Mikey and Zack should stay together, but that is just my opinion! I don't like Ryan, but I don't like Bren right now. I know he is vulnerable and is probably afraid of Ryan but he has hurt Mikey and that just doesn't fly with me! More soon!

Ryan is such a cunt.. And thanks for the update I loved it

I love this so much <3 please update soon :)

I was so hung up on Mikey and Brendon being together, but now I realize that Brendon's a bit of a wankstain... Mikey needs to be with Zack.

I absolutely LOVED Sinners, and I'm ridiculously excited for this sequel. I can't wait to really see the ways everyone (Brendon, Mikey, Ryan, etc.) have changed and stayed the same in the past four years.

Also, speaking of Sinners (hope you don't mind if I comment a bit about it here)... it was the best story I've read in a while. The dynamic of Ryan and Brendon's relationship, and then adding Mikey to the mix... I honestly don't have words for how unique and well-written the fucked-up-ness of the whole situation was. GENIUS. Really, I can't even. I loved how you portrayed Ryan and Brendon especially. I particularly liked that you made Ryan dominant, because in a lot of other fics he's soft and fragile and I'd gotten tired of reading that. AHHHH, it was just SO FREAKING GOOD.

I was reading some of your other stuff too and came across a story you'd taken down because of something about publishing, and just saw the comment below about your book deadline... Anyway, my point is I just wanted to say that you definitely deserve to be published. Amazing, amazing work.

Can't wait for the next update of Saviours!

ahhh! I just read book one to here in two days and i am dying! I usually hate books that don't have happy endings, but it is just so captivating, and when Ryan appeared, i literally got butterflies in my stomach! Brendon is such a little bitch..and they are married! I just want Zacky to come and keep him safe and love him! SO you should really make him appear in the next chappy! (: But i loooveee it!

The deadline for my book is coming up quick. I promise I'll pick this bak up just after christmas.

Oh my goodness I swear it has been like two months and this is fucking killing me dear so I'm going to strongly urge you to update because I am literally dying. No joke my whole body is going to implode if there isn't an update soon.

D: This definintely counts as a mindfuck.
God I love this story. Everytime that I see it's been update, I literally feel like jumping up and down and screaming like a little fan girl, however I'm in a public library right now, and I"m pretty sure doing that would get me some unwanted attention. -_-
Uh, anyways, why is Brendon being a meanie?! I think Mikey has a right to be angry.
Oh shit! Ryan's back! And they're married?! I really hope you update again soon. :)

love it...its now getting extemaly interesting to the point where i dont want to stop reading

CAUSE HE MARRIED THAT FUCKING PSYCHO RYAN!
Mikey needs to leave. Like, ASAMOTHERFUCKINGP.
Can't I just adopt him? Keep him a way from the bad man?
And gquick question WHY IN THE FUCK IS RYAN WATCHING HIM SLEEP?!? HOW IN THE FUCK DID HE GET IN??? WAS IT PRETTY? WAS HE THE CULPRIT?
AND I'M USING CAPS WAYYY TO MUCH. There. Better?

So I'm quite annoyed at Brendon right now!!! He was so harsh towards Mikey!!! although Im kinda glad he was because I really really really love Zacky and Mikey together! Plus Zacky is probably the sweetest person in this story and I so hope he doesnt get hurt to badly (my guess is he will get hurt at some point though so just not too badly I hope).
Now Ryan is back and we have another cliff-hanger!!! I'm really anxious to know what Ryan is going to do. Although I do wonder
a) was Ryan watching Mikey sleep?
b) if so did Mikey sleep-talk "Zacky" ?
c)How did Ryan get into Mikey's room?
d)If they are not in Mikey's room has Ryan kidnapped Mikey and if so where has He taken him?
Hopefully my questions will be answered soon so update soon please!!!!!!!
And Thank you:)