Lover Bewitched - Comments

AHHHH! TEASE!

OMG who rang the buzzer was it the werewolves? And yeah what the heck was Layla doing isn't she supost to be at the camp anyway? Come on write more PLEASE.

OMG who rang the buzzer was it the werewolves? And yeah what the heck was Layla doing isn't she supost to be at the camp anyway? Come on write more PLEASE.

So mean don't tease me like this lol love it anyway

Ugh! I so want to kill whoever just rang the buzzer. How dare they interrupt that. I hope you update soon so we can maybe get a continuation of that. Also, what did Layla do? You said she was running away (sneaking away) looking guilty but is it just because of what they talked about or did she do something?

Ugh! I so want to kill whoever just rang the buzzer. How dare they interrupt that. I hope you update soon so we can maybe get a continuation of that. Also, what did Layla do? You said she was running away (sneaking away) looking guilty but is it just because of what they talked about or did she do something?

Your portrayal of the Brothers is accurate, this is one of my favourites for that reason. People often manipulate the characters for all the lovey dovey crap but you keep it real and believable. Please update again soon, I think you're a terrific writer!

Come on! Whats going to happen. Its always cliff hangers with the Brotherhood.

Ack! What's gonna happen?!

Ack! What's gonna happen?!

YES! They kissed!!!

Knowing these two, not where i want it to but i hope it goes there

LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!! I am glad they finally talked and worked it all out. I am also glad to see she was able to overcome the fear and overcome the sadness of her brother and that he was there to help her through it. Naked? I can't wait to see where this goes.

OH MY GOD! I am just speechless. That kiss was definitely worth it. Stupid Nate. They still need to talk so he can explain everything. I hope that is the next chapter because I want to know what really happened too. Please update again soon. Love the story

[comment swap] I only read the first chapter, and even though is isn't something I'd go read on my own, it's very well written. I really like the way you narrate it and provide character backgrounds. It's all very fascinating, and I didn't get bored while reading, which is always good. You might want to go back through and do some light editing; I noticed a few typos while reading. And also, I don't know if it's just me, but the large size of the font is kind of distracting/annoying. Otherwise, this sounds like it's going to be a great story and I wish you luck on it!

Please let those two idiots get back together, he about to go crazy again and she loves him. Awesome chapter

i agree. they just need to get it on. this is just crazy them not talking. They obviously love each other. love it. can't wait for the next chapter. update soon please

update?

More please! Poor Lexi!

Damn it! There are really no other words, awesome chapter tho!