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  • bublbabie

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    Whoa! that is not something she should have walked into. HE really needs to tell her how he feels now and get rid of Layla. All she seems to be doing is causing problems. Please update again really soon. I love this story.
    July 8th, 2012 at 02:16pm
  • AlexandraWitchy

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    Nooooo Fritz! Whyyyyyyyyy?!?!?!?!?! And Quinn is being so cute with him being all protective of her but she kicked butt! Go females!
    June 27th, 2012 at 08:48pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Of course they wuld kiss lol
    June 27th, 2012 at 06:22pm
  • bublbabie

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    please update again soon
    June 27th, 2012 at 05:36pm
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    please update again soon
    June 27th, 2012 at 05:36pm
  • bublbabie

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    AH! you are such a tease. Come on with the kiss already. Love it so much. His over protectiveness is so cute
    June 27th, 2012 at 05:36pm
  • AlexandraWitchy

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    NOOO! Don't stop there! What's Quinn gonna do?!?!?! When are they finally going to hook up?! Come on!!!!!!
    June 26th, 2012 at 12:27am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    He is so overprotective it's cute
    June 25th, 2012 at 06:35pm
  • bublbabie

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    He is really protective of her, clearly a sign that they really need to get together already. love this story. Please update again soon. I want to see how the training goes.
    June 25th, 2012 at 03:16pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    They know they like each other, they need to just get together lol Great chapter
    June 13th, 2012 at 06:29pm
  • factory girl

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    i still find it hard to keep up with so many characters but i still love this, and how it ended is just so damn cute. please update again soon
    June 13th, 2012 at 03:27pm
  • bublbabie

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    Love that they are getting closer.I hope they get together soon. This is killing me. Please keep updating. I love this story so much
    June 13th, 2012 at 08:36am
  • jesus christ.

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    the idea is really good and really creative, you have good character descriptions and your plot seems really well formed, but you have a lot of work to do on grammar and such. your quotations, in specific, could use some help. otherwise, this story is pretty badass. (:
    June 9th, 2012 at 03:23am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    This story is really good. I enjoyed reading it. Love how you have written it and everything is combined. Glad comment swap brought me to this, because I am now in love with this story! It’s just so cute, and I love it a lot. Please keep it up, and continue the amazing writing that you are doing! Subscribed and recommending.
    June 9th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • factory girl

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    Omg can you please just update now, comment swap bought me here but i am so glad it did. i love everything about this, the story line completely drags you in and Qhuinn and Lexi together are perfect.
    The only problem i have is keeping up with who all the characters are. but i still love it so please update again soon :)
    June 9th, 2012 at 02:01am
  • FreyaBalance.

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    This story is great, though I am finding it hard to read through the layout everything is too big and making my eyes go funny. Plus the black on white is very hard on the eyes. But overall the description in the story is fantastic. You have such a detailed description on everything its so beautifully written.

    This is a very good story and you should keep it going :-)
    June 8th, 2012 at 03:27pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Damn I want to know now and werewolves! You have to update this story is too good not to : )
    June 1st, 2012 at 06:09pm
  • bublbabie

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    who is it? who is it? please update soon and don't wait so long in between again.I really love this story and I was sad when it wasn't updated
    June 1st, 2012 at 04:24pm
  • AlexandraWitchy

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    This story is great. Are you getting some of this stuff from the newest book Lover Reborn? I'm liking Quinn right now but it'd be awesome if there was some more brother action and ....idk really. But it is good. Update please. :)
    May 30th, 2012 at 12:15am
  • AlexandraWitchy

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    This story is great. Are you getting some of this stuff from the newest book Lover Reborn? I'm liking Quinn right now but it'd be awesome if there was some more brother action and ....idk really. But it is good. Update please. :)
    May 30th, 2012 at 12:15am