Hmm I really like this. I believe that Frank is like a hybrid or something I don't know. I mean doesn't it usually hurt when you get bit by a vampire? I mean its suppose to so like yeah. But maybe because he desired it and he desires Gerard that's why it didn't hurt? I like how Gerard would prefer to have the burning sensation at the back of his throat instead of feeding. Mikey I hope you fall in love with Ray! -.- Then you'll feel like shit later on about hurting him. 0 Update soon please! - Jenn.
hehe there are 69 comments...and now i'm destroying that nice number. boom die 69! die! um sorry...weird shit's happening here... anyway, awesome update! i hope gerard doesn't have to marry her, because i just know she'll treat frank bad:(
Call it Toro, I called my dog Toro! :) ok a bass and a dog are two different things but idk Ray is just so amazing so I HAD to name something after him ;)
One last final thing, I promise! I'm really not that much of a creep. I added the link to this story to the homepage on my phone, that's how much I love it<3
One last thing, then I promise I'll leave you alone... Keep the whole love/caring/respect thing Gerard has for Frank and vice versa. That's what keeps everything in check and keeps things from turning into a watered down porno. Plus, it gives me goosebumps, the whole nine yards, ya know?
Oh, and the whole chemistry between Frank and Gerard? The kissing and the touching and the blood drinking? Sexy as fuck. Don't mean to sound all perverted and stuff, but more of that please. Go further (;
First of all, I've never really been a fan of the whole vampire/werewolf thing, but in your case, that aspect makes it all the better. I really, truly love your story and will definately keep reading it. You'd better just keep updating, like all day every day (: Seriously, you're a very good writer and I find myself connecting to both Frank and Gerard. I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work<3
Omg that was awesome! Emily's my name! ^.^ so what's going to happen with Frankie? Is it something bad? D: I hope not!!! Maybe it's like something really good? Yeah, I think so!