Damn.. She just can't catch a break can she? I wonder, what will happen to her? who has her? And so on.. I also wonder what Edward will say to this and what about Alice didn't she see this coming? A lot of questions for only one chapter.. Is there a sequel coming or a dramatic end? Idk, I can't remember right about now. Good chapter.
That whole penis conversation got me snorting - yes I sometimes snort of I laugh hard enough. i.e.; you made me laugh a lot. This is spectacular and I'm definitely looking forward to the update! :D
Just read the first chapter and I couldn't stop laughing. "Tree. Tree. Tree. Oh look a bush!" Haha! And everything that Jacey says just seems funny to me. Her thinking process is awesome. Now I'm going to read some more chapters. :)
Damn... I wonder how things will go from here, and if/when she remembers, if that will matter so much to her again. But it could be that it matters no matter what. IDK, random thinker... Can't wait for more :3
I absolutely love it please update again soon!! what happens, does edward find her and turn her cause shes close to death? Does she die and edward live in regret? is this the end of them being together??? you hve to update!! SOON!!
hi hi i just spent the last few hours reading all that you have written so far and i love it!!! i cant wait to see what happens to baby jacey. whats really funny is i know all about her height problem im 5 3 and my boyfriends 6 2 not kool...anyways cant wait for the next one and have fun writing :)