Smoke And Mirrors - Comments

alright i got it changed. please let me know if this helps any

haha sorry about the layout. im still new at this so ill see what i can do about changing it. thank you so much :D

I really like this story and you're writing style!
It's very good!
The story is very original, which I love!
The only bad thing is the layout makes it hard to read. I had to squint my eyes a little ahah.
But keep up the good work and keep writing this story because I love it!