Being Pretty Is Not Enough - Comments

I'm really loving the daily updates!!! Fucking Mitch, always fucking shit up!! I hope they talk everything out and soon!!! Damn and how did Bri grow 3 inches?lol

Omg. She might need some real help to just sort out her thoughts. Her mind is so crazy but tbh it's probably how I would think as well. Love the updates!

@ mrsmshadz
I'm going for the daily update thing! I need to take advantage of the free time I have so I hope you're all enjoying it XD.

I'm here just fell behind on reading lol Ooooo I can't wait!!

@ mrsmshadz
Hi! I was beginning to wonder where you had gone! Yeah, I want to update quickly because we're so close to the end already, well not THAT but pretty close. Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it.

She was not wearing rags lol loved this update!! Ugh, I can't wait for more!!

Yes please update this week if you can. That would be awesome!!

@ wilda73
It's not so much that there's more to conversation as much as it is about what he meant and how he felt for saying the things he said. I made sure to emphasize how he felt but she obviously doesn't know that so she's made this crazy idea of him. This is all soon to unravel so stay tuned.

@ redcurlygirl_45
The next one's good! Trust me, it was not planned to be like it is but I decided to just improvise and mix things a bit. Maybe I won't wait until Monday so stay tuned.

It's good to know what she is upset about finally!!! But I really think there's more to that conversation between Bri and Michelle, than what she heard.

Omg!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!

Brian is so sweet to her. No guy would ever be that patient in real life. Omg that was so good. Can't wait for more.

@ Lost.without.her
Yeah, I know they should but all at its rightful time. Thank you very much for reading.

@ Lucyy Jayy
Thank you so much! This brought a huge smile to my face, a very much needed one, too. Well, she DOES frustrate me because she's very real in my head, I can practically see her and hear her and it's so difficult to put Brian (who has already been through so much) go through even more because of her. In this imaginary world, love is THAT strong and because of it he can see right through all the crap. She's really just sick; I went through many of the things she's going through that's why I know for a fact that it can't happen any differently. Anxiety, panic, paranoia and an eating disorder is enough to cause that amount of turmoil on someone.

I'm not sure how long this story will actually turn out to be, I already have everything written down so I know how it will end I just don't know how many more chapters it will have. Thank you for reading and for having as much patience with me as Brian has with Tracey.

She's so selfish. She's only thinking about her feelings. It's ridiculous the amount of patience that Bryan has for her childish behavior. I would've stopped trying from the get-go when she didn't want to explain to him her reasoning for her departure. And he's still claiming that he'll wait for her?!?! WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS MAN! DUMP HER ASS ALREADY!!

You are an amazing writer invoking these feelings within me! Does her character not get you frustrated as you're writing this?

This is making my heart ache!!!!!! They need to get back together...

@ wilda73
join the club, she doesn't understand herself either. She's so emotionally unstable, it's practically impossible for her to make up her mind about what she wants.

I don't hate her, I just don't understand her

Omg that was good. So sad to think of what's to come.

@ mrsmshadz
Well, I've spent a bit too much time (shamefully admits) looking at pictures of the guys and Brian, around the time the story takes place, which would be a couple of years ago, looked very lean. His muscles have always been really defined and the hipbones thing is mostly to emphasize the pressure that she was feeling.