Just For Now - Comments

From Comment Swap.
I'm actual not a very big hockey fan so I was a little hesitant about reading this at first but I quickly got into the story and Addison. I actually saw a lot of myself in her so that helped me get into the story as well. The detail you put into it was great, but then again I'm a sucker for loads of detail xD I especially loved the moment when Claude entered the story, I squealed and since he didn't realize who she was that got me even more excited and kept me reading. I adore this story and have begun fangirling about a hockey team I know nothing about so whatever you are doing keep doing it haha I will definitly be subscribing c:

This is great!! I loved everything about it!! the different languages is also a good point, hockey isn't something im usually into but this has a really good story line, its very strong and straight to the point, you haven't spent to long getting into it, keeping peoples attention, I have subscribed cause im loving this story already

This is really awesome! :D I'm not entirely interested in Hockey players but this is really awesome. Its easily hooking. So far I see no grammar errors. And the back layout is really nice. easy to read. My only issue on it is the spacing of the lines. But that is my opinion. :D haha But I hope you continue to write this story, get more readers and comments, and subscribers because this is exquisite.
This is wonder full, I hope you continue.
Cassie

This is not quite what I usually read. But I really enjoyed reading your story. It is well written and easy to read.
I think that the idea was really intresting. I don’t know anything about the ice-hockey or the teams, but actually it was quite easy to understand for me.
Keep on writing :)

I second the person below me. Um, I've never gotten into hockey so I don't know the main person you're writing this for. All I have to say id you are an amazing writer, it's detailed, which is good :) I also like the layout, it's simple. I have no complaints so keep writing :D

From the comment swap. I do not follow hockey so i do not know who any of these people are. I like your writing style okay and it seems to be nicely developed. I like where this story seems to be going and I have never really seen a hockey story on Mibba before so that is interesting in itself. So, overall this is just a nice story and I wish you a very good luck in completing it!

Came here from comment swap, and it's been so long since I've seen a hockey story through this. Unfortunately it was a Flyers story and I literally groaned when seeing them, bahah. But I'd never let that stop me from reading a story, no matter if I don't like the players.

Your writing is developed nicely and I like where this is going, a woman moving over from a job and thrown into unfamiliar territory, but then you see you actually knows the ginger, which is a nice touch. You don't read a lot of stories where the women already know the love interest, or at least I don't anyway. It's nice. Keep writing.

can you write more!!!?? PLEASE!

....however, just because of this I may start watching it a little more ;)

This is seriously good, I don't really know who the team is because I don't really follow the sport - but nevertheless, I wonder if she'll forgive him..;)
Keep it going though, I love it!

Glad she didn't crumble too easily. Make him work for the forgiveness, like he should be made to do after how their relationship fell apart. Great job so far, can't wait to see exactly where you take this!

Great update! I think that she should let him sweat it out for a while and keep doing her thing. I agree with the previous poster...Maybe some Talbo action would serve Claude right...besides Max is sexy as hell and always makes for fun reading...cant wait to see where this goes....keep up the great writing:)

Wow, I'm siding with Addison on this one! She's so right and to say that Claude did that is out right unforgivable. Let's see how long Addison keeps it up before she forgives him. I think Max should put the moves on her to give Claude some competion and see that Addison doesn't need him in her life but than again you'd have to hot french boys to deal with and who wants that drama? Haha. Anway, i loved the encounter between them. Amazing job! Looking forward to the next update!

This is so good, but Claude is such a douchebag.

OHMYGOD! I would be so mad at him! I can't wait to see what she says to Claude! :')

I can't wait to see how this encounter between them turns out!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Wonder what she's going to say to him. You're a great writer!

This is a great story! Extremely well detailed with the beginning and well written and very descriptive. I started just reading but the beginning pulled me in and just got through reading. Great job, keep it up!

I'm so glad that I've managed to stumble upon this story. I normally don't go out of my way to find sport, so I'm super glad that comment-swap spit this out for me. The way this is written is incredible and I definitely can't wait to read the next chapter!

I love this story so far. (:
It 's so well written, and I love that it's about my favorite team && player (;