Just For Now - Comments

I'll never get over how much I love this. And you have to update soon, so I don't go without Claude too long!

Glad Claude realized who she was. Hopefully he'll apologize & they can be friends again.

So after 13 comment swaps I finally get one about my forte: hockey! and I must say that this is very, very good! I'm definitely going to subscribe to it. I love how the second chapter ends because it's completely different than the first chapter in the polar-opposite, you-make-my-head-spin kind of way. Love it! xo

Although I usually detest the Flyers, I'm really intrigued by this story. And it doesn't help my growing soft spot for Claude Giroux either :)I liked the addition of the letter from highschool, it really gave the reader alot of good background information. I can't believe that she only looked "oddly familiar" to Claude, I really felt for Addison at that scene. Can't wait to read the next update!

I'm just gonna start out by saying, I am a huge Blues fan, so naturally, I hate the fliers. But, there's nothing wrong with a little friendly competition, right?(;
I really like Addison's character. You can really tell how apprehensive she is about moving it, and it shows a lot about her personality.
I also like how you added the letter so we could get a background on their relationship.

I am not a sports fan at all and like the last comment said, I don't find them to necessarily fit into fan fictions either. However, I like you writing. I think that has a great story line and all and all I find it very interesting!

Its stunning! Which is surprising for me to say so, I'm not much of a sports fan, and find they don't usually "mesh" well with fan-fiction, you're a beautiful writer, you have quite the way with words. You even made a disgusting locker room filled with sweaty guys sound pretty intriguiging. I love you attention to detail and how you made everything from the title to the layout fit the story completely. All in all it was a marvelous work and I'm not sure about a read every chapter, but I'll subscribe, it'll be nice to get to see where this goes. Oh and I like how you established Addison's feelings for Claude right away and gave us their history with hockey, it was a nice case of foreshadowing!

This is the first story I have read of a sports player and my my my it is fantastic. Its actually really well written and the little details are making it work together really well. And even though there is only two chapters so far you are doing wonderfully well so keep it up! c:

This is the first story I have read of a sports player and my my my it is fantastic. Its actually really well written and the little details are making it work together really well. And even though there is only two chapters so far you are doing wonderfully well so keep it up! c:

I don't read sport fanfics, so this is the first sport fanfiction I've read. Mibba's comment swap does work wonders

Anyway, I only read the first chapter and I must say, this is beautifully written. I admire writers who are detailed in what they wrote, as I suck at details. Sometimes, it's the little details which make the story good.

And the layout is a bonus point as well. I like pastel orange (like peach)

First story of a sports player on Mibba. FIRSTIES. Also, this was a really good story to start out as my first. Like everything to have in a good story is there, and your grammar/ spelling is on point so kudos. :)I really don't know much about hockey, so it's nice you didn't really put anything about it within the context so pretty much anyone can read it. :3 I love that, I love this, this was an amazing sports fix first so ah. <3 Keep it up.

I had no idea who this dude was before I started reading, but this is pretty awesome!! even though there are only two chapters, it already has me sucked in. that's the sign of a good story! I also really like how you've put things into a lot of detail. the last few stories I've read have been a bit vague--they're good stories, but they can be even better with more detail, and that's what I see here. good job, and keep updating! :-)

Through contests and comment swaps, I've read a lot of SLASH hockey stories (not that I'm complaining). This is a nice change to see something happening outside of the team. A whole new set of paths this story can go.

The letter thing is something I really relate to seeing as I do that all the time. I've got an old tin bow filled with these letters.

Back from birdwalking, I'm liking the Philly team (Philly kid). You've bot three dimensional characters... and something that sounds like it really could have happened.

Only two chapters?! I found this story via the comment swap, but lordy, I will forever be hooked. So far, as bad as it sounds, I haven't found a single story I truly loved until I read my first two hockey stories. But, could you please post again. Soon. Now. Yeah.

I've never read a story about sports players, and I'm not really into any sports other than basketball, but this is fantastic so far. I was a little sad when I saw this only had two chapters, I was expecting more to be up, but that only builds up my anticipation more for it. I like your writing style and you're very descriptive. So, update soon yeah?

I usually don't read stories about sport players, because I'm not really into them. But, mibba's comment swap application brought me to this story, and I did read it. :) It is very well written, and so far I am into it. You're a very good writer, and the story was started very well, for my own taste. I'll most likely come back to read the rest of what you write on it, so keep it up? <3

Can't wait to see what he does either when he recognizes her, or her name rings a bell. His reaction should definitely be interesting!

Umm can she please slap him? How can you not recognize the girl you grew up with?? Anyhow, good update I feel like you really know how to pace the action. Can't wait to see her reaction.

Can't wait for an update, very interesting:)

can't wait to see where this goes!