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  • tomaszewskik22

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    Alright, So I’m in love with Tony Stark. Don’t ask why, just am. Always will be. The first few chapters were hard for me to get through; things were fast moving, and just really confusing with the Characters. I kind of see where you were going with it, and I was happy that the chapters got longer and way more descriptive. I totally thing you have Jarvis down, and I love that you threw in Tony’s personality. I know I wouldn’t be able to write Tony very well considering his sense of humor, which is why I love him so much. So bravo!
    there ya go!
    June 3rd, 2013 at 06:41am
  • arye.tyler

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    Honestly, I think that I should probably hate this story. Half or more of the Avengers were out of character at any given point, and I think that a similar story could have been written in half the chapters. That being said, though, I love this story. It has a certain charm to it that overrides all of its seemingly insurmountable flaws The characters are endearingly human, and the twists that you wrote in are what really got me through it. You've got a good story, here, my friend.
    December 22nd, 2012 at 04:21pm
  • JustThinking

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    Thank you for this part of the story! Smile
    November 15th, 2012 at 05:20pm
  • Garideth

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    THAT'S HOW YOU END IT??? WHAT THE FUCK??? RAHHH, I'M IN A DEPRESSED RAGE. (Does that make sense? Probably not...)

    Anyway, I'm ready for your sequel thingy! Maybe there are some answers to be found!

    I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, even though you've destroyed me like twenty times! :P
    November 15th, 2012 at 01:32am
  • JustThinking

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    Just subscribed to the sequel thingy! I'm kind of sad this is almost over.. But knowing the story in itself isn't, makes up for it. Hmm... Wuhu! Author note mention! Hehe.. Good chapter. Smile
    November 14th, 2012 at 04:08pm
  • Garideth

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    I'M HAPPY AND SAD AT THE SAME TIME, AND I DON'T KNOW WHICH EMOTION TO CLING TO.
    I'm sad that it's almost over. REALLY sad.
    But I'm SO FREAKING HAPPY that you're making a prequel! And that Toni gets a happy ending! And that I got a shout out! :D
    I will MOST DEFINITELY keep up with everything you are cooking up! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    November 13th, 2012 at 10:10pm
  • Garideth

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    OhmysweetCastiel! My emotions are wack!
    First off, Tony beating the shit outta Kanen was perfect. The little bitch deserved it.
    And awww, your story is the only one that's ever made me okay with Stony. I'm happy for them.
    NO. She cannot leave! She must stay!
    And no, I can't believe how close we are to the end! I can't deal with that!
    But I still can't wait for the next chapter.
    November 13th, 2012 at 01:20am
  • JustThinking

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    So the wicked bitch from hell is there? I mean her mom of course... So her mom came to get her? Doesn't sound to good really.. What happened with that Kanen guy? I think I either missed it of something.. Good chapter. Smile
    November 13th, 2012 at 12:24am
  • JustThinking

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    Negotiations with psychopaths always end up going wrong.. I think... Damn...
    November 9th, 2012 at 10:39pm
  • ShuperGurl143

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    Nooooooo this can't be the end yet..... Toni has to be saved. Either by Stark or Loki. Or Hawkeye or Steve... I love Loki in this story. Update ASAP.
    November 9th, 2012 at 10:08pm
  • Garideth

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    Oh, shit! I teared up and almost cried in public! And I know that they will save Toni, but really. I'm panicking. So update soon!
    November 8th, 2012 at 10:54pm
  • Garideth

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    I'm trying to imagine the awkwardness of Clint and Loki trying to get to know each other...

    Anyway, this is bad! What torture techniques? I must know what is happening!
    November 7th, 2012 at 09:54pm
  • Garideth

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    See, this is what happens when the daughter of a superhero wanders around New York City alone... Tsk, tsk, Toni.
    November 7th, 2012 at 12:42am
  • JustThinking

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    Well f@&k... Dun dun dun... And the drama continues.., good chapter. Smile
    November 6th, 2012 at 04:22pm
  • JustThinking

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    Well cats out of the bag.. Wondering how things will go from here.. Good chapter. Smile
    November 4th, 2012 at 06:47pm
  • Garideth

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    That final line was just perfect! Ah! I'm still loving this oh, so much. Update soon! :D
    November 2nd, 2012 at 08:05pm
  • Garideth

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    First off: Yay Schaefer and Brooke!

    Second: Kanen amuses me.

    Can't wait to see where this goes!
    November 1st, 2012 at 04:46am
  • JustThinking

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    Well damn....!! Good chapter. Smile
    November 1st, 2012 at 12:00am
  • brooke; lovely

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    I'M SO CONFUSED!!!
    October 31st, 2012 at 09:06pm
  • pyrobubblegum

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    omg omg omg I love you!!! A character with the name Antoinette. Its rare to have a main character with that name. So I'm excited myself ^_^
    October 31st, 2012 at 05:02am