Can't Handle This - Comments

Wheeee! Update! Me gusta! <33

I wonder how bad things are since she seemed to freak out more than I expected.. Hmm... And how things will be in the morning...

I got this badboy from comment swap so I'll only comment on the first chapter.

I like the thought of the narrative (although not entirely original, I can already tell that it's going to be good)

You've got a good sense of writing although it does take some getting into, I just felt that it was a bit slow but that's probably just me :')

You've got an amazing style of writing though and I believe it's a great start to a fic and taking by the comments below everyone else is loving it also.

Keep up the great work :)

~Jack's Creativity

This seems pretty good so far. Giving it a shot. :3

And that is why a 17 year old girl should not be doing anything with a 22 year old MAN.
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I love you for using the word spiffy. It made me infinitely happy. :3
more pwease?? :D <3

Grrrrr...Natasha had to ruin everything!!! Its soooooo cute;) I love it<3 Update soooon pleasseee!!!<3

Stupid Natasha >m<" she ruined a perfect moment! hahaha loving this story! Update soon! :-p

asdkfdjasomfdap!
so cute!!!!! <3

I really like this story so far! I do have a couple of comments and questions though. One, how old exactly is Toni? Cause I'm trying to picture how old her and her friends are but I'm not sure :s And like how her age compares to her dad's age and the other Avengers' ages and stuff. Another question: Pamplemousse. Is that her actually name or is it just a nickname? If so what's her real name or how did she get named that? Also wouldn't Toni's mom have come looking for her by now? Since like 2 days have passed? And her friends just randomly stayed the nite at Tony's too? And how come Tony never questioned whether Toni is actually his daughter? Like she just shows up and says hey I'm your daughter and there's not much else said about it. He just accepts her right in. Oh another question/comment. Isn't Loki kind of like the bad guy? So what's he doing with the Avengers? Wow sorry I asked a lot of questions :-p I just like knowing the full story. Anyways, great job! I really like it! Loved the pancake scene :-p Looking forward to the next chapter! :-p

It would be very interesting to see Toni and Clint together. Update soon!

I know how Toni felt: with the whole Clint and Natasha:S Poor girl...something has to happen between Toni and Clint it would be sooo cute<3 Update soon I need my fix<3

I love father/daughter time!
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This chapter makes me very happy. I am a life ruiner. xD
And I would totally say something like "watch your damn language."
I loves you!

I liked when Tony passed out and then asked JARVIS if he was drunk or not, hahaha. I also like the PopTart addiction that Thor seems to have, and how cute Clint seems to be. You have a good amount of detail and a good idea for the whole story itself, and I liked how her name ended up being Antoinette, which could be shortened to Toni. I think that was really creative of you to do. I enjoy your story, keep up the good work! :)

I really like this story :) the part where Tony passes out is funny and so was the pancake war. Her friends are really quirky and I like them. I think Antoniette has a crush on Clint :) anyway, really good story keep up the good work.

Wheeee! That made me very happy :3

I can read everything just fine. Granted I'm zoomed in immensely. So the font is actually thicker. :p
“I do not wish to eat the house, nor you, young Grapefruit. I only wish to devour the PopTarts.”... Best part ever...
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Thank Castiel for comment swap! I freaking love this story!
Of course Tony has a kid! I mean, I've never been a big fan of kid-fics, but this I like!
I must say, when I first started reading this, I was worried that you were going to ship Tony and Steve. (Not that I have anything against slash, just... I don't support it for them.)
So, it is going to be a Clint/OC fic? And that OC is Tony's daughter? Whoa, drama!
(I personally am a Thor and Loki girl through and through! I have a thing for brothers, apparently, seeing as Boromir and Faramir are my favorite LOTR characters!)
I LOVED the part about Thor's PopTarts! I can completely imagine him going super protective over them!
I also love that you made Loki on their side. I absolutely ADORE him, and even though I find his whole twisted, bad guy thing totally sexy, I just want him and Thor to be brothers again!
I am subscribing to this AND recommending it, for you, my friend, are AWESOME!

i would never reall read ths jind of fiction...comment swap is a b*tch. not saying it was bad, i just normally wouldnt read it. it was still pretty good yet the coloring made it harder to read which is a real strain sometimes. i was about to stop reading. just my opinion