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  • This.Is.Me.

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    I love the update:) It seems like Toni was getting jealous, when Brooke called dibs on Clint:D Update again soon please<3 x
    June 10th, 2012 at 09:19pm
  • ThingCalledLove

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    I have to agree with the comment below mine, about both the grey on black font, that made the story a little difficult to read, and the lack of spacing between paragraphs.

    Other than that, I really enjoyed it. I love the Avengers, and it really seems like you grasped their characteristics quite well. I could totally picture Tony behaving the way he did at the beginning. I also loved how the Avengers interacted with each other.

    The premise of this story was really cute, and unique, and I think you're doing a great job with it!
    June 9th, 2012 at 09:26pm
  • bellamy blake

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    I typically don't comment on layouts in a swap because I can't stand it when people only focus on my layout and not the actual content of the story, but I did have to switch to the default layout because the gray text on black was impossible to read. I also have to mention that it's against the rules to not put spaces in between paragraphs, so this story could get reported for that.

    Moving on to the actual content of this story, I have to begin by saying that I'm not familiar with the Avengers, so if I'm a little clueless, please forgive me XD I really enjoyed the premise of the fic, and I thought the dialogue between the characters sounded realistic and flowed very naturally. My only suggestion as far as concrit goes is that I would have loved to have seen more description in this first chapter.
    June 9th, 2012 at 09:00pm
  • Riddle517

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    I love it! More please!!! <3
    June 9th, 2012 at 06:12pm
  • leolion1234

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    Very interesting style of grocery shopping. Update soon!
    June 9th, 2012 at 01:47am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    JUST those 3?
    Well, they seem cool to me.
    I like them
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    June 8th, 2012 at 06:02am
  • Amanda-Renee

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    so Pamplemousse is my favorite so far. She seems a bit crazy :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • brooke; lovely

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    Oh, quick comment. It's facial piercingS. I have multiple :D
    June 8th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • brooke; lovely

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    AHHHHHHHH!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!! YOU ARE OFFICIALLY MY FAVOURITE PERSON EVER!!! <3333333333
    June 8th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • Strange Lifestyles

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    Awesome. I love it.
    June 6th, 2012 at 08:36pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Lol! Wow love pancakes!
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    June 5th, 2012 at 08:47pm
  • leolion1234

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    I really like the story, update soon!
    June 4th, 2012 at 04:19am
  • This.Is.Me.

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    I LOVE this story<3 Please update soon...I hope there will be romance between Clint and Antoinette;)<3
    June 3rd, 2012 at 12:27pm
  • brooke; lovely

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    I love you so much for including the pancake fight. Also, can I call dibs on Clint? If so, DIBS! HE'S MINE! mwahahaha xD
    June 1st, 2012 at 04:36am
  • Baroque Faeries;

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    I really like this story. Lol I love how tony just passed out, didn't even doubt her a second. :-)
    May 30th, 2012 at 05:53pm
  • Strange Lifestyles

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    Oh I love this!
    May 28th, 2012 at 01:29am
  • Riddle517

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    I love it! More PLEASE!!!
    May 25th, 2012 at 03:11am
  • brooke; lovely

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    Ahhhhhhhhh! I love it!!!
    May 17th, 2012 at 07:27pm
  • brooke; lovely

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    If you somehow include me in this story, I will write you a somewhat smutty Superhusbands fic in return! ;D

    Love this story to pieces! <3
    May 15th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • luminos.

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    I love love love this story!
    Tony Stark is my favorite person ever!
    He's so sassy hahahah(:
    May 10th, 2012 at 11:23pm
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