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  • TheKelsie

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    The white tiger dude? Fuuuuuck
    June 26th, 2012 at 06:24am
  • Bluecaty15

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    I love it, please update again soon!!
    June 12th, 2012 at 03:47am
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    I love it, please update again soon!!
    June 12th, 2012 at 03:47am
  • Through-the-Night

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    This is so pretty! I like Nate a lot, and of course Avery. Is it bad that I'm happy she left Chance? Oh and I really liked Josh's line about identity theft. Yes, he is a bad boy.
    June 12th, 2012 at 02:24am
  • TheKelsie

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    For some reason, I laughed at the end. Probably because I am imagining her reaction to being told she has to save all those people. xD
    June 11th, 2012 at 09:45pm
  • TheKelsie

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    O.O I thought that boy was an ass who wanted her dead! And poor Liam....
    June 8th, 2012 at 11:06am
  • paramore4

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    Love it best story I read yet keep writing please xD
    June 7th, 2012 at 02:57pm
  • TheKelsie

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    Oh man! I love this story! I am so glad I found it! I subscribed, so I'll be waiting!
    June 5th, 2012 at 09:13pm
  • pizZiCcato

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    need name???
    June 1st, 2012 at 09:12am
  • Hello I love you

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    I got confused about the name thing! Ahhaa no one aske you to change them!
    Hmm for boys how about
    Castillo, jett, Gregory, Albert
    I dunno just putting them out there
    For girls
    Daisy, Eva, Ellie, storm, maggie
    Just of the top of my head(:
    May 24th, 2012 at 11:27pm
  • Hello I love you

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    This is awesome, I can't believe I hadnt commented yet!
    Anyways, yeah this is the Shiz and you should keep the names of the characters because you chose them for a reason and who are we to tell you to change them(: ahahha if you need new names give me a shout and I can connjure up a few
    Keep up the good work! (:
    May 24th, 2012 at 11:24pm
  • StingrayXV

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    i really like this story!!! please keep going!! XD <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
    May 24th, 2012 at 07:54pm
  • luminos.

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    This story was really creepy!
    I noticed a few things with your dialogue like in the first chapter there was something with Ahhh that didn't make sense, but it's not a big deal!
    You did a really good job and I hope you keep writing!
    May 10th, 2012 at 11:01pm
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