love, this is really good like your other story! you should really update soon! c; and you should check out my story slash stories i have a niall horan one and im staring a harry styles one!
Sigh, she is so lucky. I mean, who wouldn't wanna go out on a date with Harry Styles?? They're adorable together already and I can't wait to see how the relationship progresses.
Harry, Harry, Harry. You make him so cute in these chapters. I do hope to see more in the future! I absolutely loved it, and I can't wait for the next update :D **Subbed <10
Haha. I LOVE Harry in this!! :) He's soooo cute. Him and Sam make a cute couple. Haha. Sam is sooooo lucky to have someone like Harry in her life. ;) Update soon!! <3
When I read about Nichole's boyfriend having 'Lou' as his name, my mind went straight to thinking "It MUST be the Louis Tomlinson". And I was right! But why is his hair long? Louis has short hair right? Or did he grew it out already?? Hmm...
I adore your story. It gave me butterflies in my stomach! I don't know why, but I can just imagine having any of the lads as a boyfriend.
I like writers being very detail and descriptive in what they're writing. However, you don't have to describe every single thing which Sam did. Because if you do it in every chapter, it'll become a bit mundane for the readers.
Sorry for the critique. I'm giving my honest opinion. Other than that, I'm loving this story. Subscribed and recommended, dear! Keep the chapters running coz I wanna know what's gonna happen to the both of them, since Sam's there for only the summer holidays...
P/S: Bee-yoo-tee-full layout and banner! I'm in love with it!
This is seriously the cutest thing ever, I think it's tugging at my heart strings a little bit. The layout is extremely adorable, too, including the banner. You're a terrific writer, as well. I can't wait for another update! xx
and you should check out my story slash stories i have a niall horan one and im staring a harry styles one!