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  • lovefleurlove

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    Wow! It's so great!! I loves the way the boys came it. Update soon please
    May 30th, 2012 at 10:04pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Hey! Greate update!
    Update soon please
    May 30th, 2012 at 09:19pm
  • running in circles;

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    Just going to comment as I read...
    Miranda Kerr!! Love her to bits. You know, I don't actually know anything about One Direction except that it's chalked full of lovely, British dudes. :) Maybe I'll learn something?

    "I have never been there before so it was going to be a big change but I will get used to it." The tense is off. It should be, at least I think, "I have never been there before so it IS going to be a big change, but I will get used to it." Get it? Good. :) Oh, and another awkward tense in the next sentence! It's okay. I'm terrible with keeping the tense in my own work.

    "I just graduated and AM going to visit my aunt and cousins that live there." She's GOING to do this stuff right? If she already has, and I'm just jumping ahead of myself, then change it all to past tense. Need help? Just ask! :)

    RUMOR HAS IT. RUMOR HAS IT. OHHHH. :) Love Adele to bits too.

    "I was glad we finally made it because I was starting to get tired of being on a plane with tons of random people that I didn’t even know." HAHAHA. I feel the same way. Just, when I'm walking around strange people in grocery stores...

    I agree. British accents are amazing.

    More tense issues... Maybe an editor should be brought in? Editors are SUPER helpful. If I actually kept up with my stories on Mibba, then I would want an editor. Editors are like the BEST Mibba friends.

    Okay, I didn't get to read it all, but I'll finish it later. I have to finish writing a huge group paper! Later, gator!
    May 30th, 2012 at 04:53am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Update!!! :)
    May 29th, 2012 at 03:35am
  • June Blossom 143

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    Love it so far! <3
    May 27th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • invaderpayne

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    I like this! Update soon! :)
    May 27th, 2012 at 06:28pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    I loved the layout. :)
    Update soon please.
    May 26th, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • eleighfritz

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    Subscribed!
    I can't wait to read about Harry!
    You always do a lovely job writing your stories! (:
    May 26th, 2012 at 01:56am
  • iron and wine.

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    This story is amazing, Teddi! You always make your characters so real, if that compliment makes any sense, lool :)
    May 23rd, 2012 at 02:16am
  • punk ariel.

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    This is me - :O!!!!
    I love this story, I think it will be AMAZING, no doubt about it! Subscribed :) Can't wait to see Harry in the next chapter <333
    May 22nd, 2012 at 05:56pm
  • sleepyhollow;

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    This is cute :)
    May 22nd, 2012 at 12:29pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Cute!!
    Can't wait to see where this goes!! :)
    Update soon!
    May 21st, 2012 at 08:55pm
  • lovefleurlove

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    Sounds really good!
    Subscribed!
    I love it and I cant wait for the first chapter!
    May 18th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    sounds awesome.
    definitely subscribing. :)
    the banner is lovely btw!
    May 18th, 2012 at 12:13am
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