Dancing Dead - Comments

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I read through the comments as well, just so that I would not be repeating too much of the same points - but I agree with some of the other posters. This was really easy to read, even if you've never heard of the people it's about, and the dialogue and banter between the characters is well thought out. I do agree with some of the other commenters that if the dialogue is spread a little it would flow better, but I think that is a minor aspect. Overall, the work is great.

I love it i cant wait for more

I really like the story cant wait to see more

Loving it! hope to see more soon!

This is for comment swap :)
This story is very different and the plot is well thought out. I really like that there is plenty of dialogue and also that you've incorporated some Italian to make it more authentic and realistic.
I agree with some of the other commenters about spreading your dialogue a little to make it flow a but better, but overall I'm impressed!

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So I have no idea who this is about but it was really pretty easy to read. And it was pretty interesting even for someone who has never heard of the people.
Good job!!

This is for the comment swap.
So I have no idea who this is about but it was really pretty easy to read. And it was pretty interesting even for someone who has never heard of the people.
Good job!!

This is pretty cool. I feel like I haven't seen a Repo story in forever! Though I'm probably not looking that hard. -.- Can't wait to read more!! :)

i like this story and love the insert of the song meg sang.

Comment Swap.

This is certainly an original concept for a fic, definitely haven't read one like it before.

There are a few little mistakes in it, I'm not going to lie, but they're easy to get past. You could spread you paragraphs and dialogue out a little more, just to make it easier for the people who are reading it.

I thought that the dialogue between characters was good and well written.

Keep up the good work

Comment swap! Oh damn, this is original! I never read about grave robbers before, haha! I actually enjoyed it, although I'm not one for Avenged Sevenfold fanfic. And I love how you named the second chapter after my favorite Disney song ever :D Although, I think you should have shorter paragraphs, because having everything together like that makes it a little hard to read. I dislike your layout because of how gigantic the letters are and the black background makes my head hurt, but it's your style so... and yeah, those of us who don't like it have the DEFAULT LAYOUT button. Anyways, good start, keep it up!

I really think there aren't enough repo fanfics. Keep it up. I love this so far ❤