Little Miss Innocent - Comments

Thank you so much! :D <3

Sekretly stalking me, y/y? Jessica never questioned, she was just there. this is spot on to my life!

Anys, I loved it! I have no idea how you can say you had a hard time getting it together. The idea is solid and works with just about every single direction in the book. I think you have nothing to worry about with this fic and I can't wait to see what happens, especially with the whole Hannah and James meeting. Very excited :D

Thank you! I'm basically just trying to jot down ideas because my mind works way faster then my fingers can type. I'm going back and looking for all the grammar issues. Thank you for helping!!

Ok, love the idea, the plot summary before the chapter was decent and very eye catching. There are a few grammatical things in there (incorrect use of punctuation, such as a ? instead of a . for a statement). However, this is a good lead into and I can't wait to see how this story plays out.