I practically had a heart attack when I seen you updated! This is with a doubt MY FAVORITE Larry story EVER! ♥ Ohh the feels. I'm so glad that you updated! Its such a wonderful, amazing and a beautiful story ♥ . I can't wait for the next update!(:
@ cole pendery. I'm actually shocked that someone is still with this story! Sorry for not updating, but thank you so so much. It really means a lot. Thank you! <3
I let out a scream when I realized you updated, and now I'm half crying because of the ending. I just, I can't. He finally did it, and I just. I'm feeling so many emotions for both of them. My heart hurts. Oh my god, I love you so much, so so much.
(Comment Swap) I think this is a good fan fiction story. It doesn’t involve a random person falling in love with a celebrity, not that I don’t like those stories, just it’s a tad overused. But what I like about this is how the story flows really smoothly, and I haven’t seen any noticeable spelling/grammatical mistakes. As a reader, it really made me want to know if he will go through the surgery, if they will fall in love, etc. only thing I would change is that maybe Louis should be feeling more side effects, or whatnot? Overall good story, keep writing!
(Comment Swap) I think this is a good fan fiction story. It doesn’t involve a random person falling in love with a celebrity, not that I don’t like those stories, just it’s a tad overused. But what I like about this is how the story flows really smoothly, and I haven’t seen any noticeable spelling/grammatical mistakes. As a reader, it really made me want to know if he will go through the surgery, if they will fall in love, etc. only thing I would change is that maybe Louis should be feeling more side effects, or whatnot? Overall good story, keep writing!
i LOVE one direction and Harry and Louis and I am practically convinced, like most fans are, that they're secretly gay for each other hahah I don't usually read slash stories but yours was well-written and clear, and it was easy to follow :)
This story is really interesting its different from any other story that i have read i dont really like one dirction but its good :) Your writing skills are really good keep on writing :) I also like how you have written the relationship between Louis and Harry!!
you and your writing skills that make me feel so miserable...but it's so good, god damn it. I just don't understand as well why Louis won't get the surgery, if he has a chance of survival than isn't that better than knowing if he didn't take surgery, he'd definitely die? I feel so sorry for Louis and Harry :( AND YES, HARRY IS STARTING TO GET FEELINGS FOR HARRY. WOOP WOOP. Yeah, you're nothing more now Harry. Just you wait. Haha, I can't wait for more of this xD
I'm so glad you're continuing with this. I understand what you mean about all the Larry drama irl though. People are dumb. But omfg I love it sjkdfhjkfsd. You just like to kill people with anticipation, don't you? punk :p
I promise you that commenting on my profile was unnecessary because I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. It's kind of a love/hate relationship; I love this story because it's amazing, yet I hate it because it tears my heart into shreds. I hope everything's been okay, if you want to vent just leave a comment on my profile xxx
Your story was recommended by a few of my 1D friends and now I know why. This really made me want to cry. If I was reading it in the confines of my bedroom, I would have bawled like a baby, honestly. I was reading this in the train on my way home and it certainly made me teary-eyed. What's worse, I was listening to 'Holes Inside' (Joe Brooks) while reading this and it's like Do not, ever stop writing this! I'll recommend this, for sure.
This is with a doubt MY FAVORITE Larry story EVER! ♥
Ohh the feels. I'm so glad that you updated! Its such a wonderful, amazing and a beautiful story ♥ .
I can't wait for the next update!(: