May 19th, 2012 at 11:56pm
First of all, the summary is excellent. It had me hooked with all the talk of taboo love and magic potions. The idea of a magic potion with the power to change a person is obviously something that's been done before, but your story seems like a fresh take on the whole thing, which is exciting :)
I love that you're actually taking time to build the characters and the setting. It helps to build a picture in my mind and form a connection with the characters.
Calissta really is really hyper. But not the super annoying type I hate reading about, it actually make her quite endearing :)
super start! :D
And then I read the summary...WOW, this is a great new idea! I think I was waiting for something like this!! I can't wait to dig into this story! The deal with magic and the consequences and such is really intriguing! =D This summary had the hooks, and I am oh sooo curious to know what's going to happen...
I read the first two chapter. I do like how this story started. You gave the readers background on the main character without actually giving a technical biography. It's interesting to see that it's not a typical setting for a high school student. I love that I already know her passion, strong points and weakness. She's relate-able and that is soo important to readers.
So far this is an super awesome start to what looks like a GREAT story! I can't wait to read more!!