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  • Harlot4Vengenz1

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    I hope you finish this. I love it!
    November 11th, 2012 at 04:44pm
  • chickenorawesomeness

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    Oh wow.
    July 4th, 2012 at 07:15am
  • october-ninja

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    Zacky needs to control it before he kills someone even worst Jimmy and if Jimmy dies then Syn has to kill Zacky and we cant have that
    July 3rd, 2012 at 09:38pm
  • xXEmilypXx

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    Awww I feel bad for zacky I mean being über strong would be cool but it Toatally shuts at the same timee I love ur story
    July 1st, 2012 at 07:09am
  • october-ninja

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    WOW did not see that coming
    July 1st, 2012 at 07:04am
  • Vampirelover31

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    Okay.. Heres what i think about your story.. ! that gay shit with avenged sevenfold will NEVER happen... and two i love the dark carnival because I am a juggalo... I'll recommend it and subscribe to it though but u scared me when you said avenged sevenfold and slash in one sentence... Ha... but it is really good...
    June 30th, 2012 at 04:35pm
  • chickenorawesomeness

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    Holy crap!
    June 25th, 2012 at 09:20am
  • october-ninja

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    Zacky you have to try really hard and control ur powers
    June 25th, 2012 at 02:54am
  • Sullivan1981

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    Ooh. I hope Syn can find something out by talking to 'him'. Zacky's power seems to be getting freakishly strong and i hope Jimmy can control him.... though they are cute together Very Happy
    June 24th, 2012 at 11:55pm
  • chickenorawesomeness

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    I can feel something brewing up.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 11:21pm
  • october-ninja

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    I'M GONE FOR A WEEK AND THIS HAPPENS.........well i must say i'm happy about it
    June 21st, 2012 at 11:22pm
  • Sullivan1981

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    Blimey. This is going to take some getting used to... now they are both vampires.

    Fun and games ahead for Jimmy and Zacky now .. hmm, somehow I don't think so. I bet the "council" will still come after Zacky.
    June 17th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • chickenorawesomeness

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    Wasn't expecting that.
    June 16th, 2012 at 08:42am
  • SuicideCommando

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    I really didn't expect that! Great chapter, I can't wait to read more!
    June 15th, 2012 at 05:34pm
  • Sullivan1981

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    Oh fluffing heck. Uh-oh what did you do Zacky. Bad boy.

    This isn't going to end well ....
    June 14th, 2012 at 12:15am
  • chickenorawesomeness

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    That was intense.
    June 13th, 2012 at 03:03am
  • october-ninja

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    O.O Did not see that coming
    June 12th, 2012 at 11:30pm
  • october-ninja

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    666 Is the sign of HOT sex with a vampire
    June 10th, 2012 at 03:28am
  • chickenorawesomeness

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    666 and you're writing a story with vampires, demons, and a werewolves? This is gold!
    June 9th, 2012 at 07:27pm
  • I feel insane

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    Yay! Sexy time! :D
    Heh, 666 word count xD
    June 9th, 2012 at 06:49pm
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