The Carnival - Comments

I hope you finish this. I love it!

Oh wow.

Zacky needs to control it before he kills someone even worst Jimmy and if Jimmy dies then Syn has to kill Zacky and we cant have that

Awww I feel bad for zacky I mean being über strong would be cool but it Toatally shuts at the same timee I love ur story

WOW did not see that coming

Okay.. Heres what i think about your story.. ! that gay shit with avenged sevenfold will NEVER happen... and two i love the dark carnival because I am a juggalo... I'll recommend it and subscribe to it though but u scared me when you said avenged sevenfold and slash in one sentence... Ha... but it is really good...

Holy crap!

Zacky you have to try really hard and control ur powers

Ooh. I hope Syn can find something out by talking to 'him'. Zacky's power seems to be getting freakishly strong and i hope Jimmy can control him.... though they are cute together

I can feel something brewing up.

I'M GONE FOR A WEEK AND THIS HAPPENS.........well i must say i'm happy about it

Blimey. This is going to take some getting used to... now they are both vampires.

Fun and games ahead for Jimmy and Zacky now .. hmm, somehow I don't think so. I bet the "council" will still come after Zacky.

Wasn't expecting that.

I really didn't expect that! Great chapter, I can't wait to read more!

Oh fluffing heck. Uh-oh what did you do Zacky. Bad boy.

This isn't going to end well ....

That was intense.

O.O Did not see that coming

666 Is the sign of HOT sex with a vampire

666 and you're writing a story with vampires, demons, and a werewolves? This is gold!

Yay! Sexy time! :D
Heh, 666 word count xD