The Carnival - Comments

Syn reminds me of a diva.. always preening and making people pick his mess up after him - lol
I wonder what the 'act' is ... hmmm

can't wait for more x

Ooh can't wait to see how this develops between Zacky and Jimmy.

Love how the guys all fit with a particular theme, werewolf, vampire etc..

Can't wait to see what happens next. Seems Zacky has had a hard life and no-one will miss him if he absorbs himself into this new life.. that's sad

I love this so far! :D
Totally amazing and very well written.
I look forward to reading more :) *subscribed*
Update soon!

Ahaha. I love how Syn just dragged him out by his ankle.
Other writer, UPDATE SOON!
Jk. I hate to rush because i know how it is but I'm really liking this story so far!(=

Can't wait for more!

Oh I'm sure you'll love being in the circus with Jim Jams, Zacky ;)

This is awesome. Can't wait to read more. =)

So i really like this so far.
I like how they're not all vampires like in most stories with demons.
Can't wait to see where you guys take this. Update soon, please?(=

Wow! This is nice! Creds! :D gonna subscribe to this!

I like this plot its weird update soon please

This is really good, can't wait for more.

This is amazing so far, I hope there's more.

Ooh the circus scares me. Hmmmm.. what's Zacky going to find when he goes snooping.

I like this x