All At Once - Comments

Ahhh! Yes! SHE SAID YES! I love this, but I feel like the story isn't completely over yet. I'd love a sequel! Like one where Sara pops out a little princess for Danny? ;)

You never seize to amaze me. I don't think there is one story of yours that I haven't read or that I didn't like.

Paul Ranger is my favorite player. He left the Lightning for 3 years and just signed with the Marlies. I would love to read a story based on him and his disappearance. Myabe that would be better if it was written a little more into the season though. So scratch that one.

How about Chris Kreider of the Rangers? Or Erik Gudbranson, Taylor or Tom Pyatt, Jared Staal, Steve Downie, Matt Martin, BizNasty, just to name a few? Or maybe a Lightning/Syracus Crunch or Leaf/Marlies player.

Oh and this was definitely sequel-worthy! ;)

I'm so sad it's over but it was such an amazing ending! I loved the idea for the proposal! Can't wait for your next story!

I loved it! You are such an amazing writer! I'd really like to read a good Evgeni Malkin story! =)

That was a beautiful end to a beautiful story. I can't wait to read the next one as I spent my entire Labor Day weekend reading everything you ever wrote on here. It's a crisis: I'm addicted. I think Milan Lucic would be a nice next one? All big and strong and... -fans self- sorry.

What a great way to end the story, I loved it, I can't wait to see what you come up with next :-)

Sean Couturier. HELLO! :)

Oh, now you've gone and made me cry!!! This was a fantastic story from start to finish. Seriously, thank you for sharing your words with us!

As for your next story...how about the Avs? I've got a little love affair going on with Ryan O'Reilly right now.

OH MY GOD what a squeal-worthy ending! the fairy lights, the self-knotted ties, the "will you marry us," the four diamonds...so perfect.

Such an amazing story! Love them.

What about a Max Talbot or Scott Hartnell story? They deserve to fall in love too!

This story was perfect, I loved it! The proposal was adorable. I'm sad it's over, but I loved the ending.

What a perfect ending to a perfect story! It really was a "feel good" type story - one that makes you believe that fairy tales do happen. I really loved this story and always looked forward to every update.
I was really rooting for Sara and Danny - and even came around to empathizing with Sylvie - but those boys were absolutely adorable!!! All of this from a tried and true Pens fan. See how good you are!!!!

Look forward to your next endeavour.
Thanks for all the work you do.

If you write a Marc-Andre Fleury story, that would be amazing :)

Ugh, this story makes me feel so many emotions! I'm glad Sara and Silvie had a chance to talk, and were able to do so like adults. Of course, now there's a niggling worry about Danny, with everything Silvie told Sara. Can I just tell you how much I love your writing [for the six hundredth time]?

Really glad Sylvie & Sara talked like adults! I feel for Sylvie. Love how strong Sara was in this.

This was real...I totally respect that talk and that both women were adults about everything...Update soon please...I am dying to know what happens!!!

Sara & Sylvie's conversation was necessary & I'm glad it finally happened. At least now they have an understanding of sorts & Sylvie doesn't appear only as a bitchy & bitter ex-wife.

I was very sad to hear of Danny's mother's passing. My thought & prayers are with him & his family at this difficult time.

I loved Sara and Sylvie's talk, you actually made Sylvie likable and I really enjoyed getting to hear her side of the story!

I would like Sara to get pregnant. That would be awesome

Great update! I loved how Sara went and talked to Sylvie. I hope Danny doesn't do anything stupid.