First off I am sooooo glad comment swap sent me here. I love that man so much ;)
I love the layout, it's really nice! :) I think one thing that could be improved is spacing though, if you double space the paragraphs is makes it so much easier to read :) Other than that I love your writing and I will totally be subscribing! :D
I read this three times trying to figure out why it wasn't making any sense. So I went and looked at your other stories and realized you posted this one to the wrong story lol. I felt like an idiot as I sat here forever going back and reading the whole thing over again haha.