Theophany - Comments

I gotta update? Poop! Bad deal!

That was amazing. And now I go to bed

i... she... WHOA!

Oh shit! All I gotta say.

You're evil missy! And you darn well know why! Chapter 8. I hate you. I'm in the market for a new friend.

I'm so proud of you and this it's so good. I can't wait so see how the notebook and ideas you've told me pan out.

I really like rain. Jus sayin

Thank you for all the comments guys! So, I finally tried my hand at an actual layout and so it might be up shortly. Let me know what works and what doesn't! I like all questions, comments, concerns, constructive criticism, life problems, etc. etc...

Rampage you're amazing. This is amazing. I am so proud of you and I can't believe this is your first shot at writing other than for school. Did you even take creative writing? Brian Avi and I did and this is better than anything any of us would have written right outta the gate. Lol. Nothing like the text book style we were joking about last week.

You don't know how good it is to see a great original fiction amongst a flood of fan-fics. I love this. I sub'ed, keep the great work coming! :)

lol the crazy guy named Loon! Awesome!!

You're doin good girl!

I've only read the first chapter, but it has definitely caught my eye. It's sometimes hard to find stories like this on Mibba, and I love it when I do. From my reading, the only thing I really didn't like was the dialogue and the places in which it was put. I don't know how to explain, haha. There isn't anything wrong with it, just not the style of writing I like. I don't like the layout and wished you made your own, but it doesn't matter, since it has nothing to do with the story. Pretty good story so far.

Holy poop is amazing la. And I thought I was depressing. You're good. Ima post a link to this in my next update. You need readers boo this is fantastic. You got skillz!

is... is holy poop good or bad? O.O

Holy poop girl this is... WHOA!!!!!!