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  • Blue Meanie

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    I gotta update? Poop! Bad deal!
    October 16th, 2012 at 09:04pm
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    That was amazing. And now I go to bed
    July 3rd, 2012 at 06:37am
  • Blue Meanie

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    i... she... WHOA!
    June 20th, 2012 at 08:05pm
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    Oh shit! All I gotta say.
    June 18th, 2012 at 08:23pm
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    You're evil missy! And you darn well know why! Chapter 8. I hate you. I'm in the market for a new friend.
    June 18th, 2012 at 08:18pm
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    I'm so proud of you and this it's so good. I can't wait so see how the notebook and ideas you've told me pan out.
    June 6th, 2012 at 10:21am
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    I really like rain. Jus sayin
    May 31st, 2012 at 09:08pm
  • theoriginalrampage

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    Thank you for all the comments guys! So, I finally tried my hand at an actual layout and so it might be up shortly. Let me know what works and what doesn't! I like all questions, comments, concerns, constructive criticism, life problems, etc. etc...
    May 30th, 2012 at 05:01am
  • Blue Meanie

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    Rampage you're amazing. This is amazing. I am so proud of you and I can't believe this is your first shot at writing other than for school. Did you even take creative writing? Brian Avi and I did and this is better than anything any of us would have written right outta the gate. Lol. Nothing like the text book style we were joking about last week.
    May 29th, 2012 at 02:21am
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    You don't know how good it is to see a great original fiction amongst a flood of fan-fics. I love this. I sub'ed, keep the great work coming! :)
    May 28th, 2012 at 11:34am
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    lol the crazy guy named Loon! Awesome!! 2 Guns
    May 27th, 2012 at 02:28am
  • Blue Meanie

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    You're doin good girl!
    May 25th, 2012 at 12:19am
  • A Savage God Reigns

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    I've only read the first chapter, but it has definitely caught my eye. It's sometimes hard to find stories like this on Mibba, and I love it when I do. From my reading, the only thing I really didn't like was the dialogue and the places in which it was put. I don't know how to explain, haha. There isn't anything wrong with it, just not the style of writing I like. I don't like the layout and wished you made your own, but it doesn't matter, since it has nothing to do with the story. Pretty good story so far.
    May 23rd, 2012 at 12:12am
  • Blue Meanie

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    Holy poop is amazing la. And I thought I was depressing. You're good. Ima post a link to this in my next update. You need readers boo this is fantastic. You got skillz!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 10:42pm
  • theoriginalrampage

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    is... is holy poop good or bad? O.O
    May 22nd, 2012 at 03:44pm
  • Blue Meanie

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    Holy poop girl this is... WHOA!!!!!!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 07:56am
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