The Beginning of the End - Comments

Well, wow. I LOVED the outfits! That rarely happens, that I like so many sets in a story. I favorited a bunch. The story itself was a bit angsty for my tastes. I liked the spin and I liked Seamus. I don't see much of him in most fanfics- either it's a full-on love story, or he barely makes an appearance. So it was pretty perfect. Oh, and after Dumbledore died, I thought Dobby walked into the Great Hall. In my defense, it's quite late but I found it funny :]

Poor Effie

It's okay. I was completely shocked because they've become like parents to me. I just feel helpless to my boyfriend right now :/ juuuuuuuuust wait ;D

I'm sorry about your boyfriend's parents! And ugh, she needs to make Harry jealous or something. He needs to pay.

C'mon harry, you can do it!

well here's the thing, Fred has always secretly liked Effie a little bit but its never been anything major lol
everything will work out and no ones going to get too hurt. I wouldn't do that to my favorite characters :)

I wonder if fred is going to develop a crush on efffie? that would be cool but harry wouldn't be pleased and it would just hurt fred in the end, but I have this feeling...

the twins are epic!

You go Effie! Make harry jealous!!! :D

Eeep, I love this!! c: Keep at it!

It cracks me up how she interacts with the twins :)

Thank you :)

its amazing

Go Effie!!! Ron and Hermione were meant to be together! :D

That's how i felt reading the book and watching the movie, she's horrible! but it was sad when she died in the last one :/

Ohhh, I'm starting to hate harry less. I think I was just having a moment, and I like how you're sticking to the book with this story, it makes it more realistic. Every time that I hear that stupid Lavender Brown though, in any type of Harry Potter context, I want to rip her head off!!!

He's feeling quite insane right now haha. As you can tell I'm trying to stick to
the books and movies as close as possible so some is predictable but there's a twist that
i'm about to throw in ;)

I like it a lot but I will personally kill Harry if he cannot get his head on straight. Oh my gosh I really want Ron and Hermione to get together sooooo incredibly bad!!!!

Go Effie!!!
Loving this! :D

I know )': but just wait. There's a lot more to it than you think haha