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  • fearless-forever

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    Poor Effie )': I never have liked harry...
    May 30th, 2012 at 02:56am
  • NikkiLove94

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    Nonono they don't suck, I get what you're saying haha. I'll try to work something like that out with the next chapter. I think y'all might like the one I'm working on now (:
    May 29th, 2012 at 11:31pm
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    Poor Harry, I think he should perhaps withdraw from the two girls for a while, while trying to figure it out, and then maybe Effie should get mad, but Ginny decides to just give him his space. So Effie gets into some sort of awkward situation while trying to figure it out. Maybe something should attack her and Harry should try to save her but she just kills it and kind of looks at him like "ok?" I don't konw I think those ideas kind of suck, I''m jsut excited to see what you come up with Mr. Green
    May 29th, 2012 at 10:39pm
  • NikkiLove94

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    Well if you have any other ideas for this story, let me know and I will definitely try
    to lace them in (: and I'm glad that you feel amazing Smile lol
    May 29th, 2012 at 02:54am
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    You have no idea how amazing I feel right now! jk
    Anyway I'm happy you liked my idea. I love brainstorming ideas for stories all the time but I have trouble committing to writing them.
    May 29th, 2012 at 02:43am
  • Vampyris

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    OMG JUST TELL HIM! hahaha! I love the updates. <3 Btw my story is up if your still interested. http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/466420/Malice/

    Oh, I have quick question: How do you change the font to Italics and hide links, I noticed you had Effie as a link and I'm on Polyvore too! (I can't help it) XD I was just curious as to how you did it!
    May 29th, 2012 at 12:15am
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    I think maybe she should try to figure out his feelings before she tells him. She should like hear Ron telling Harry to "Decide between them two already." But she doesn't hear which two so she thinks one of them is Ginny but she doesn't know who the other person is so she tries to figure it out. Just my thoughts Mr. Green
    May 28th, 2012 at 09:57pm
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    I think maybe she should try to figure out his feelings before she tells him. She should like hear Ron telling Harry to "Decide between them two already." But she doesn't hear which two so she thinks one of them is Ginny but she doesn't know who the other person is so she tries to figure it out. Just my thoughts Mr. Green
    May 28th, 2012 at 09:57pm
  • NikkiLove94

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    Why thank you Mr. Green
    May 28th, 2012 at 04:40am
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    I really like this story, it's one of the better harry potter ones I have read Very Happy
    May 28th, 2012 at 03:50am
  • NikkiLove94

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    well its still relatively new so there's
    time for it to get attention :)
    I actually got the name off of the sisterhood of the traveling
    pants 2 lol Harry's always been my favorite ;)
    May 27th, 2012 at 03:16pm
  • Vampyris

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    I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more attention. I'm loving this so far. Effie is such a cute name too! I love Harry Wink
    May 27th, 2012 at 01:02pm