Tongue Tied - Comments

@ headrushxreeta
Thank you so much for your compliment. It's one of my rawest stories and yeah I think most storylines are cliche but it's how you write it and make it in your own. Not everything is rainbows and unicorns and that's what I did for his story. I'm so proud for this one since it was my first semi dark raw story so I was nervous about the whole Naima overcoming the attack bit.

Absolutely fantastic story! I was so enamored that I couldn't read anything else until I finished this. Everything about this was just epic And amazing. Is definitely one of my favorite stories now, it's so well written, the characters are phenomenal and the plot I absolutely loved. You managed to take a slightly cliche plot and make it so wonderfully executed that I would just be completely submerged in this other realm: I was completely wrapped up in this story and while I'm sad that is over, it'll be one of my favorite stories to continually reread.

@ SierraSYNYSTER
Awww thank you so much. I treated it as such and loved writing it from beginning to end.

I've been reading this the past few weeks like a book. Beautifully written!

@ teenagedream91
hahaha it would definitely be too much.

@ BlueDreams
I think I would have a heart attack if I did a sequel for tongue tied lol it would be too much.

@ teenagedream91
I agree with you darling.

@ bxgurl95
Yeah it's finally over after working on it for like two years lol. I get those too and when I was looking up spots to pick from advertisements of Costa Rica showed the most.
The lion and the rebel will be updated very soon and thank you so much. I like keeping my readers on their toes for a bit :)

Oh my goodness it's over :'(
(There's a advertisement for a trip to Costa Rica right now in my browser...) weird.)
Anyways! That was lovely and I can't wait to read more of he Asani Leona and twins story.

This story was amazing and kept me wanting more, I never knew what would happen next.

@ BlueDreams
A very high more than likely no maybe lol for now I feel like I'm finished and if I ever extended it I better have a good plot because there's no use of writing anything else at the moment.

@ teenagedream91
Maybe someday this will have a sequel, not just The Lion and the Rebel

@ BlueDreams
Oh haha four is alright number and three is a good number but I don't like odd numbers. Don't want the middle child syndrome never good XD
That's good. I felt the itch too so i had to type out the last chapter even though I wanted to prolong it as much as I could. It didn't do me any good trying to do that since I have other stories I want to focus on.

@ teenagedream91
I meant that four was big haha 3 is a perfect number.
I understand your feelings since I'm experiencing them. I'm itching to write but I need sleep so I'm leaving it for the weekend or Friday night.

@ BlueDreams
Yeah haha they never had a break and then the husband beat cancer so they were celebrating for two occasions.
Three kids is a big family? Really? I consider more than four a big family. Three or four kids is like medium size for me haha
It was a great ride but all good rides must come to an end and I am a little relieved since I always worried if I ever was going to finish the story

@ teenagedream91
two months? That's a lot! xD
That's just... really big family haha
Oh love, it's been a really great ride and I know that we'll both miss this.

@ BlueDreams
3 weeks is reasonable and usually honeymoons can be longer or shorter depending on the couple. I know one of my relatives that too almost two months off for their honeymoon haha they had zero time to themselves and they deserved it.
Sex is always lacking and they catch up in some way lol
No three isn't enough for Tom haha if they just had one instead of twins he will be convincing Nai to pop out another one.
Thank you so much and I'm getting emotional reading your message. It has been my baby for the longest time and now I am able to focus on all my other stories hopefully haha

Oh goodness... I knew that leaving the babies behind would be hard for both but Nai and Tom definitely deserved a little time for themselves. 3 weeks seems reasonable.
Costa Rica is a really good choice! And well yes. They needed a sex catch-up haha
3 children isn't enough for Tom? Goodness haha
Oh my. I'm balling in tears already. His present was so so perfect. And the epilogue was perfect as well. I'm so proud to have read this story and of you for being such an amazing writer. You are absolutely fantastic darling <3

@ teenagedream91
It's not really frustration. They're written and I hope to have covered everything I wanted them to express :)

@ BlueDreams
Awww boo. Don't get too frustrated :)

@ teenagedream91
I'm being so picky with the vows, it's making me mad at myself.