Tongue Tied - Comments

@ BlueDreams
Okay. I can't wait to read SWIB

@ teenagedream91
I saw that you update. Let me just tackle SWIB and I'll read your update :D

@ drica
No problem. English is a hard language to grasp and our spelling does not make sense most of the time haha I feel you, honestly.
It does happen and it's horrible. Girls get drugged, its too dark or they black out and they never find out who it is. Most stories I have read they always find out who attacked them and it's not like that sometimes. It's just a random attack.
Thank you so much. That's what I was aiming for. Nai isn't perfect and she makes mistakes and so does Tom. They fight and say things to hurt one another, but they grow from it for the better. Like you said usually the girl writer's write are in the right and the guy is wrong and all. That doesnt' happen all the time. Nobody is perfect.
Thank you so much. I just love you haha I was going to extend this story, but the more I wrote it the more I realized this would be a perfect spot to end it. I'm just going to use my previous ideas for another story to make it juicer. The happy ending is indeed coming and I'm excited for it.

Oh, thank you so much for answer me and thanks for you don't care about my poor english. ;)
So I understand your point of view and I totally agree with you. This really happens in real life so I think is a perfect explanation for me right now.
I am going miss Nai and Tom either. The couple is so real and your behavior and mistakes are so humans. Totally diferente those stories where the characters looks like a super heroes, princess and seems live a fairy tale.
I just cried when the twins born. Everything was perfect. Full of drama and happiness in the end. I'm can't wait for the other chapter! The happy ending is coming! Thanks for that!

@ drica
Thank you so much for your kind words. No worries, I'm just glad that you commented. I honestly was going to make it Zane, but that part is always going to be a mystery. Sometimes when someone is raped they never find out who that person is and this is just one of those cases. Naima will never find out. Not all things are solved, ya know?
I feel so blessed and honored. I am going to miss Nai and Tom greatly because I built so much of their background for years now and it's coming to an end.

Oww! I just love this history. So I'm staying so emocional right now because a I know that the end is soon. So I have one question:

Who rapped Naima? Was Zane. Because for me seems no answer for that... Sorry for that. I'm just curios.

You're a great writer and this history about Tom and Naima is one of my favorites!

sORRY about my bad english. I hope you understand!

@ BlueDreams
Since she will be on bed rest Tom will have to take care of the kids all on his own for the most part and take care of Nai. Oh the drama that will ensue lol
awww thanks :) I'm going to work on the epilogue soon.
I am writing the next chapter for the lion and the rebel.

@ teenagedream91
Me too! And bed rest forced by the babies made her have to indulge it for their health.
I know but it's a really perfect ending. And I can't wait to read their happy ending :')
Oh that's cool! I'm wondering about Noah the most.

@ BlueDreams
Bed rest will be th death of Nai lol I hate bed rest too. I can't sit still for more than half an hour or I will go nuts unless I am really distracted by whatever I'm reading or watching.
Thanks :) well when you have twins you know which one is which and kind of have them named. She could be wrong who kicked lol it's just an assumption since you can't know which one will come first during the delivery. No not at all. Ben and Paty's oldest son is semi close to the twins age kind of lol so Nai is right. I thought it would be funny to have Ben there while she went into labor, it's funnier when a man has to witness it. It is funny Paty is all cheering while the men went into a panic.
It can be and it's usually suggested for a c section when having twins or more since its dangerous. I know!!! I'm so sad but it had to end. I can't keep going because it would just lose that spark that I had since the beginning. Truly I love this story to death and hold it close to my heart. The final chapter will be a happy one for sure.
PS in The lion and the rebel you will know the aftermath of what happened wih everyone including K'sea and Noah since they are pretty vague in this chapter.

Nai in bed rest sounds like something that could kill her.
Oh K'Sea :) All the luck to her! She's been a true friend to Nai.
You went to detail so so into it that you said which twin kicked haha That's so cute! And well, yes. Ben and Paty having a child wouldn't be shocking at all.
I loved Nai's conversation with Ben and it was really funny to have her enter labor with him there haha can you imagine both males in panic while Paty just cheers? xD
A natural birth of twins can be just painful and oh my goodness, so many emotions because childbirth is still a dangerous thing for women. It's heart aching to read it, since Tom couldn't do anything but hope for the best.
I was all happy and excited as the girls were being delivered but then my heart dropped. And I'm so emotional and overwhelmed because this story is practically over and I still can't believe it!

@ bxgurl95
You're welcome :)

@ teenagedream91
Thank you!

@ bxgurl95
Yeah sometimes there are just unknown complications when delivering. Sorry I wasn't through with it. Ben's last name is Cumberbatch. Sorry I thought everyone knew lol I always assume things which I shouldn't. Bad writer bad! XD
I will say that Noah messed up but he didnt own up to it. I wasn't going to mention it since some surgeons don't explain their mistakes and well let's say he more than knicked one of her organs.
The wedding gift is something you had to remember. Remember when Nai was taking those burlesque type pictures wearing lingerie and Lucy taking photos of her? That was Tom's gift. Hope it helps

Wow I was holding mm breath the entire time I really thought something was going to be wrong with her. But I believe with these two everything happens for a reason and they were meant to have their happiness finally.

But I have Just a few questions;
1. What's ben'a last name?
2. She did have the C-section correct?
3. What's the wedding gift that Nai gave Tom?

@ BlueDreams
He surely did.
I always look at it whenever I go over. It's so beautiful :)

@ teenagedream91
Hahah I bet he loved it xD
I know *melts* I'd totally drool over one.

@ BlueDreams
Yes everyone would be crazy when they have their groom missing.
Yes it was the catalog that she made for him. I just didnt want to elaborate something that I wrote before but his expression said it all haha
Yes it's so beautiful and it also symbolizes the eternal love of each other since it will never fade. It was sweet.

@ teenagedream91
I know! I think every bride would think the same..
Her present was still the catalog right?
Really? Oh my! I bet it's wonderful *___*

@ BlueDreams
Yeah it's the typical stuff that don't get done but it stresses every bride out. I did feel bad putting her through that since she is pregnant but it had to be done. Had to put some drama in before they get married. Tom deserved to get slapped lol going missing like that. Sh started to think he eloped with someone else XD
I thought it was a sweet gift once I saw it and it is one of the gifts that my aunt has from her wedding. It's gorgeous :)

@ bxgurl95
Thank you so much :) yes it wouldn't be them without drama. I am going to have a few other Tom stories in the works one is already out and another one will be out after this one. Also going to write a Kit harington story and a Matt smith one as well