Bruises On the Soul - Comments

I think that Pat is blowing this way out of proportion he has no right to be freaking out like he did. He's acting like she's cheating on him instead of his best friend falling in love with one of his other best friends. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS

Ok, Pat was mad. That was to be expected. Even the punch to Jon's jaw - yup, he probably deserved that.

But hopefully Pat heard through all the anger that Jon is in love with Jo - that he isnt treating her like a whore (and by the way, Jon, Pat didnt call Jo a whore. He said you were TREATING her like a whore).

The trip to Buffalo should prove that Jon is serious about this - who knows, maybe they can meet up with Kaner for Thanksgiving dinner!

As I said previously, secrets always have a way of coming to light at the most inopportune times. And someone always ends up getting hurt. In this case, I think Pat is very hurt thinking that both his best friends betrayed him.

But I also think this will end up affecting Josie and Jon - they will both feel guilty about the pain they have caused Pat.

I had a feeling that she was going to get busted as I was reading through it. I feel bad for pat

Love the shenanigans!

I understand that they are reluctant to tell Pat about their relationship, but it has been going on long enought now that they really should say something.

These things have a way of coming to the surface at the most inopportune times - so I really think Josie and Jon should take control and tell Pat themselves before he finds out on his own. If he finds out on his own, I think he will feel betrayed by the two of them

I just found this and I'm totally in love with it. I can't wait to see what's going to happen between Josie and Jon. PMS

Abby's story was very emotional - it is horrible what she had to go through, but in the end she really got a prince, who will stand by her no matter what. And I think Josie may have the same thing.

But I think Abby was encouraging Josie to tell Pat about her relationship with Jon. I think it is important that Josie be the one to tell him before he finds out from someone else - or maybe by seeing something he wasnt meant to see.

Aww this is really good! Can't wait for an update! :)

i missed this story :)

I just found this and I love it.

Really like her relationship with everyone but especially like what's going on with jon

I loved this chapter :) They are amazing together, but she was right they need to slow down

Things seem to be moving with Jon and Josie - but I think she was right to slow things down a bit.

Yes, the physical hurt has started to heal, but I think she still has a lot to deal with on the emotional side. And as wonderful as Jon is being, there are still many hurdles that Josie will have to clear before she is really able to comit to any real relationship.

They will also have to deal with Pat - as I am not sure that he will be too happy with Jon and Josie being together. Especially if they are not the ones to tell him!

I do like the way you have written Jon and Josie - there is a real ease about them, even under the difficult situation they find themselves in. Keep up the great work.

I really like this update. their first kiss

Love it love it love it. :)

Love it. I feel bad for Josie this whole time.. Update when you can!

@ soupy
I jut want to tell you- you give the best comments. Seriously. I've never had anyone go as in depth with the characters as you do. Thank you.

I think Jon almost confessed he has feelings for Josie - that is why her brother scares him.

It is also why she scares him too - but I think it is more that she unnerves him, because of his feelings for her. And I think the feelings are what scare him.

Uh oh Jon likes Josie! Great update!