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  • NervousHolyGhost

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    Comment swap sent me here, and I'd have to say this is a very well-written story and is extremely interesting. Love triangles are always interesting though; but, anyways, I really love this story and how there is conflict involved between the two love interests and Josefine.
    Keep it up :)
    August 9th, 2012 at 01:24am
  • Katie482110

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    Oh my God, that is so sad. At least Josie has Jon and Pat and the rest of the guys to protect her.
    July 23rd, 2012 at 03:55am
  • Ali.58

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    Poor Josie... Nick did only awful and terrible things to her.
    July 22nd, 2012 at 08:34am
  • soupy

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    Poor Jo - she has been through more than any of them know. But somehow, even in her drunken stuppor, she has unwittingly found her knight in shining armour who will be willing to slay the dragon for her.

    It will take a lot of time, and hopefully some therapy, to help Jo heal the wounds that must go very deep, so that she will be able to feel something - anything - again.

    Because right now, it seems that any amount of emotion Jo may have had has literally been beaten out of her.

    Perhaps Jon will be able to help Jo find the girl she used to be. If he can get passed Pat, that is!
    July 22nd, 2012 at 05:49am
  • Katie482110

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    Yay! An update! Great job :)
    July 16th, 2012 at 09:13pm
  • NMT82

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    Intersting story so far. Ugh why is Pat smothering her. Great writing
    June 29th, 2012 at 07:37am
  • Katie482110

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    I was so happy when I saw this was updated! Great job! :)
    June 29th, 2012 at 02:30am
  • A1407719

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    i love this story!! can't waait for more chapters (soon?)!!!
    June 26th, 2012 at 07:24am
  • soupy

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    Noooo, she's not!!!?

    I hope Jo gets things together. It sounds like she has a lot of support!
    June 26th, 2012 at 06:34am
  • Katie482110

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    Awesome! :)
    June 23rd, 2012 at 09:42pm
  • Ali.58

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    I loved it :)
    June 13th, 2012 at 02:18pm
  • A1407719

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    i like this story alot! can't wait for more updates!
    June 13th, 2012 at 07:48am
  • Emily Lane

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    ooh! i love this! maybe make the chapters a wee bit longer? (:
    June 13th, 2012 at 07:45am
  • TheAntsInvasion

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    Yay an update!!!!
    June 13th, 2012 at 01:26am
  • caitlinstarz

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    Really like this so far, update soon!
    June 10th, 2012 at 10:58pm
  • Ollie1223

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    Can't wait for an update! It looks great! :)
    June 6th, 2012 at 04:19am
  • Ali.58

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    Amazing chapter!
    May 31st, 2012 at 03:56pm
  • Ali.58

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    Update soon this looks really good :)
    May 29th, 2012 at 02:41pm
  • soupy

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    Captain Serious or Dudley Doo right - I kinda thing they are one and the same!
    May 29th, 2012 at 06:55am
  • threeleftfeet

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    This is amazing. Please update soon!
    May 29th, 2012 at 02:41am
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