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  • Skarsgard

    Skarsgard (110)

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    "The laughs and words of people are our enjoying the life they are given and all the things they get."
    I think you mean "out" not "our".

    I really like this though. It flows very well and you can really get the feel of it.

    Audrey is so cute. She seems very sassy. I want to know why her mom is on a plane though. And I want to know what Brian is going to say/do.

    Now update this like tonight woman! <3
    June 20th, 2012 at 06:08pm
  • Through-the-Night

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    The introduction to Audrey was amazing. I love the way she handled telling Brian that she's his daughter. Please update soon, it'll make me happy <3
    June 5th, 2012 at 03:28am
  • kassipoola

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    uhhg i didnt want it to end -.- more. now. do it. <3
    June 3rd, 2012 at 06:45pm
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