Chasing Liberty - Comments

I know that it's been a while since you updated this story, but I like it a lot so far, and was hoping you'd continue with this one. I'm interested to know what happens with Steve in this one too. Lol~

This is so interesting! I really like it.

I hope you update soon !

Loving this! Update like all the time!!

Second part of the Valentines treat

Another Avengers-based story, and with the X-Men thrown in as well! I love the layout, firstly. It's pretty neat. The summary is awesome as well, it really does draw the reader in and get you interested, especially the last bit.

I love the prologue. It gives a really good insight into Liberty's past and how she came to be added into the X-Men universe. I'm really glad that you added it in. I love finding out about the origins of people and how they came to be who they are and I think that your prologue does that excellently.

As I'm reading on, I'm falling in love with the plot. It's such a unique idea, and I haven't seen anything like it. I love that you had Chase and Liberty fight with Hawkeye and Black Widow (I may have fangirled a lot when Clint was mentioned). The fight scene itself is beautifully detailed. I also noticed a tiny little Clintasha moment that made me very happy. I love the little exchange that Natasha and Liberty have at the end of the fight, and then again on the plane.

I really like where this one is going. I love the thing that's happening between Steve and Liberty so far, and I adore the style of writing that you use. I can't wait to read more

I like Captain America, while he isn't my favorite I really do like him. But the Avngers is awesome, so I am looking past it all.

And I love that you have added in the X-men, I mean I don't know how far they are included in the story, but I'm super excited for this! The summary got my attention right from the get-go.

After having read the prologue, I can tell this story is going to be fantastic and I am already going to subscribe to it. I mean really, it's so great, I'm curious about the main character and her mutant abilities. And might I note that if my child ever had special abilities, I would so not kick them out and throw them into some orphanage, poor child.

But Professor X to the rescue!

Ooh now that Fury has shown up this story is going to get really good. I'm excited for this, truly.

I love how cleanly written this is, just enough description to understand and paint an image, not to mention you have a nice vocabulary. Liberty seems like an interesting character so far, dedicated I guess I would say.

I'm subscribing and will be back for more!

Can't wait to read more!

Awesome!!!!! I'd love to read more of Liberty's interaction with everyone. It's quite funny!!! Can't wait for more XD

I really like this story so far. I like that you're making it more of a Marvel Universe fic. Can't wait to read more. :)

Very nice.
I like how Liberty's past is traumatic, but she doesn't let that define her.
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That was really nice and sad at the same time. Very good chapter.

I always wanted telekenesis but that's because I'm lazy lol. I hope Steve helps her practice. More soon!!

Yes, bonding time. Me likes.
I bet you'll hate jury duty, everyone does.
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Liberty + Steve = WOOHOO! :D ...Sims and normal language ;D

Wow, so many emoticons. Oh, I want pizza now too. Darn you and your awesome writing!

Aww that was so cute :]

I like that little moment with Liberty and the Captain it was nice.

Good luck with jury duty, hope it's not as bs as I've heard it can be. Oh and good chapter. But the sentence where Steve is aiding liberty if she can walk back, shouldn't that be bike instead of car? I'm probably wrong.. But thighy I'd at least ask.

Hmm that chapter seemed a bit like a filler. xD Even so, I enjoyed it, it made me chuckle. I'm looking forward to another update.

I liked the chapters so far. Keep up the good work!!!

No worries, life happens and stuff, so yeah.. Not really sure what to say in this comment. You're still an awesome writer is not that, but this is editing and shit, so not so much new really.. Since I remember a lot of it from before.. So yeah.. Good chapter - good story.