Chasing Liberty - Comments

Just read the rest of the chapters that you've posted so far. I loved the details of the battle between liberty and black widow. Great job so far.

I like it so far. I'm really interested in reading a little more of it.

Hehehe, I noticed a few grammatical mistakes here and there that tripped me up a bit, but otherwise this is a pretty good story. Of course I just started reading today, so I'm wondering if there was anything different when the story was in first person. I'm really looking forward to updates, as I just subscribed. :P Also, I think you've done a great job with the Avengers' personalities so far! It feels like you've done your research.

Please update soon!

The Summary is interesting, the grammar is very good as well but yet again not an avengers fan so I can't judge the characters. I'm sorry.

I absolutely adored this last chapter for the simple fact that it had me laughing at Tony. XD

Absolutely adorable.

This is a good strong start. I Love the banner and the layout. They're gorgeous. The prologue was a bit short but I can already see that I'm going to enjoy this story. I'm thinking that the Professor is her dad, but it's only my guess until I read more of this story. :)

So good! love the way you write!

I've just starting reading this, so I'm on the prologue and I immeditally think you've made the character self centered at the beginning by believing she absolutely gorgeous and she is witty and popular, a bit of a Mary Sue but I can deal,

I LOVE IT!!!!!! I love what you did with the plot. It's just.. It's just X-Men! Asdfghjkl.asdfghjkl. YAY!!! I can't wait until the next update! Just can't! Carry on writing!!!

OMG. X-MEN. aksjdfl;asdjf;ladsfjladsfjjdf!!!!

"Yes, Tony, I made Bruce think happy thoughts." I LOLed at that. xD
Great updates!!

Chapter 17: My name is in this chapter.. jus sayin x) haahaha

Aww! He actually asked her out? and it's because of tony "the love doctor" stark? Lol. xD I actually thought of to y when I saw the title, so it fits well.. Well the while fit might be because I couldn't see any of the others doing it. Hmm.. So I wonder how the date will go, maybe sparks will fly? Maybe things will go haywire? Hmm.. Many things to look forward to hopefully. Good chapter.

I loved it!!! (: update soon, I miss reading this on a regular basis!!

finally!!!

So, when I got the notification that you updated, I basically had a Cheshire grin. Yep, I was that happy. And I was not disappointed either. I'm glad that Steve finally manned up. Also, the love doctor is a perfectly appropriate name for Tony and the chapter.

haha honestly I'm not surprised by Tony's new name for himself, since he seems to act like a Love Doctor around those two! I'm glad that Steve is finally taking her out, it only took her being kidnapped for it to happen -.-

Got home two days ago and finally found some time to catch up on mibba.. Hmm.. So she's safe again? Wuhu! *happy dance* and some long waited happening for some of the readers? Awesome! Can't wait to read it then. You're 19 now? Really belated happy birthday!! I hope it was a good one, actually I hope it was a really good one ^^ hehe.. Hmm.. Maybe some Steve and liberty action? A conversation between her and banner? Since she relaxed him and all.. Hmmm... She and Logan are so brother and sister like, it's so cute.. And I kind of hope Logan and Tony will get stuck in a room together that would be funny as hell. Hmm... Awesome chapter.

Rescue yea!!
Happy Birthday!
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Please update soon! :D