If You Only Knew - Comments

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Deerly, not queerly lmao. I loved this part. I've never read a Glee fanfic before, sounds interesting and very positive. Hope you go on wit the great work.

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I'll be honest, I usually wouldn't read a story about Glee, but I did really like this one. Your writing does a very good job of holding my interest. I liked how Darren and Kaley's relationship developed. Going from him accusing her of being a thief to moving in together! Overall, a good story. I enjoyed reading it.

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I didn't read the entire thing because it's very long and, in all honesty, it's not the type of story I usually enjoy. I do love Darren Criss though and even though the plot seems predictable and a bit cliché, your writing is very solid and easy to follow. It's a light hearted story and nicely written.
Keep writing!

I like your writing style, first of all. It flows really well and isn't hard to follow. I'm here from comment swap, and I only read a few chapters in because 50 is too much, but I'm definitely going to come back and read more because this is so cute. Your characters are easy to relate to and even though the plot is a little predictable, I'm a sucker for cliches.

@ Annabelle Graceton
Sorry, that comment was a mistake. I meant to type something earlier, but my internet went out. :/

@ ZilanHana
.....yup, I would find that to be rather strange and it makes me very confused :/

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It's quite a few chapters to it so I didn't read it all either because personally I think that 50 chapters is too long especially when you have a sequel as well. It's not really something I enjoy reading, I think the plot line is a bit too predictable. Your writing style is actually pretty nice, it's easy to read. Still, good job. :)

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Well since it's 50 chapters long, I didn't read it all, but what I did read wasn't half bad, It;s not the kind of story I enjoy, but it was still good. Your writing style is good, it flows well and is overall easy to read. The plot is storng as are your descriptions. Good job!

great! Always amazing story!

ASDLKJASDLKASLKASDKADSKLAS AHHHHHHHHHH nooooooooooooooooooooooooo feels cant function to form words

love love love love love!!!!!!!!! im pretty sure my soul would die a little bit if you werent doing a equal

I gotta say and I mean no offense but all that waiting for this chapter to come up but I gotta say it was worth the wait I can't wait for the next one then the sequel to come out XD keep up the good work I'm cheering you on and so are the rest of your fans XD

SO CUTE!!! Can't wait for the last chapterrr!

Amazing as usual. do you want guesses on pm?

Chapter 49, amazing as always, I want to squee so badly it hurts, but my room mate would think I've lost my mind.

I'm sad that this is almost over, but eagerly waiting for the sequel! To bad my brain just can't figure out a 4 word title that makes sense and isn't cheesy, cause the only one I can think of right now is: Our Happy Ever After LOL

only two chapters left?!?!? AHHHH! Can't wait :)

"If We Only Knew" or "We Go Together Like"

Ah Darren the king of cheesy...LOL , though I did have an aww moment at the kiss...alright darn you a tear or two as well...I'll get you for that!!

Titles for the sequel? 4 words, hmmm, my mind is actually going cheesy with Either "Baby Your Not Alone" or "It Just Takes Love" sorry, when it comes to titles I SUCK big time!!

GAAHHH ! Omg its great