If You Only Knew - Comments

A very happy new year to you too! Hope you have an amazing 2013!

The story: I love past two updates, as always. The new cuddle monkey nickname is adorable. And I adore that Darren is thinking so far ahead in the future. Realizing he loves her, thinking about their children, so lovely.

One note: I think you should check the code you used for this chapter, as the entity of it is in bold and italics. Probably an editing mistake somewhere in the beginning. Other than that, great job, as always!

Happy New Year!!!! Thanks for the update!!! Aaaaand I just realized I didn't leavea comment last chapter!!! :O Oh well... I don't know what happened to me :P But I loved them both!!! I'm glad Kaley is ok! And I think "cuddle monkey" totally suits Darren! LOL

bahahah cuddle monkey :)

Ohmygoodness! This story is so addicting. I just sat down and read the whole thing through...and WHAT a CLIFFHANGER. You're killin me, please please update and let everyone know what happens! (Also...really hopin that Chris starts playin for the other team, is that just me?) You're an amazing writer, this is my favorite Darren Criss fan fic Please update soon!

aghhh i found it hard to believe that she wasn't fighting harder against him but i'm glad darren made it there in time before he actually raped her!

I have reread this story like five times now since you have messaged me to read it. Seriously this wait time is killing me. I keep thinking and hoping for an email saying that this story has been updated. Please, please, please, please update again soon!!! I am dieing from anticipation!!!

Finally, finally caught up with this story. Still love it! Because The StarKids! Gotta love those gubers! And Daley are such a cute couple! Darren really has a bucket list of Daley things? Cutest thing ever! And I adore the dynamic between Kaley, Darren, Leah and Chris. The friendship they display is wonderful, I love to read about the fun they have with each other. And ugh, James is such an ass! Ryan needs to take care of him and kick his ass out! Me no gusta!

Comment swap brought me here, and I'm glad it did.
This was just amazingly put together, and just wow. I usually don't read fanfiction, and to be honest, I'm not that big fan of Glee, but this really hooked me in. The characters personalities just seem so spot on, and the descriptions that you add to your writing just makes it perfect. This was a great change of pace from what I usually read, and I loved it.
Great job!

OMG!!! I hate that James!!! I hope Megan had a great birthday!!! If Leah is based on her, she must be pretty cool!!! ^^

ughh who is this james guy and what is his deal?! seriously though D: I hope she calls out for help or something and some hears her!!!

I had just posted a comment and it's either on here, or it somehow got erased. As I said before I hope that people that like Darren Criss and Glee can appreciate how easy it looks to be able to read from the way you do your paragraphs, and the length of the Chapter's look long enough to give information, but not so long that the readers think they are on Chapter 2 when they are really still on Chapter 1.

I like how you don't have the Character's section at the top so that people will have a chance to imagine who the main character (Leah?) is on their own, because some people can forget a person in a photo - I admit to having that problem-, and picturing the character in the reader's way makes the character more personal and gives a deeper connection so that sad scenes seem more real.

Please continue this story for the Glee and Darren Criss lovers.

ahhh damn right they better make it work!!! but two weeks is still a long time away, a lot can happen...

They better make it work O.o I might cry if they don't!

I love this story! (: Glee is one of my fave shows! <3 So addicted right now! Keep up the good work! <3 <3 <3 <3 (:

LOVE this new Chapter (Which you already knew haha) LOVE how you incorporated the Starkids in this and Kaley's entrance was GENIUS!!! "Did someone say Kaley Grant!" hahahah but also I adored where you brought Karyn into this xD So many little facts in this story that make it so easy to connect with!!! <3 I must admit too that I love how close Leah and Chris are getting, it is just toooo adorable. Hmmmm Is he sure he is 100% gay?? Oh the anticipation haha. Keep it up my PLL! Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Awwwww!!! Loved it!!! And I totally LOVE Joe Walker! You should write a story about him!!! :O (Seriously!)

hahah awww that was an adorable chapter :)

Ohmygosh...don't even get me started on Joey Richter! Ugh...oh gosh...dude, I would cuddle that so hard!
ANYWAY! I loved this chapter :) It was adorable and I loved how the starkids were in it! :D

What a sweet update! Loved Chris' reaction, loved Leah's even more. Pretty hilarious :). Also love that you incorporated Darren's love for Disney in this chapter :).
Daley seriously is adorable together, I can't wait to read more!

ahhh i loved all of the Disney connections in this chapter!
If I were to cheer up Kaley, I'd tweet her:

airplanes: People are so ridiculous, just because they can't be with Darren they hate on the person who actually is? She's NOT ugly, everyone who is cyberbullying her IS.