Welcome, to the 92nd Annual Hunger Games. - Comments

I have no background with Hunger games, I know the basics of course, but not the details.
Your summary is long, which can either be a good thing or a bad thing. I didn't quite understand it but maybe it will be explained later.
As for the first chapter you are very descriptive. The first paragraph detailing Dolores is very detailed, giving the reader a great idea to build on.
Overall you are a talented writer with great ideas. Best of luck.

Comment swapper :)

I don't really understand what her 'issue' is...

Or how they got to the 92nd. If you could give backstory, that would be great :) Like a flashback or something

Well found this on comment swap and I dont usually read stuff like this but it was actually interesting keep it up :D

Just before I comment, your banner for this is chilling, the girl looks so intense :D

Now, I adore the way you write. The only knowledge of the Hunger Games I have is from comment swap bringing me to another short fan fiction prior to this. But this looks so professionally done, nonetheless.

Love! More?

I'm going to be honest, i'm a little lost. I've never seen or read the hunger games but I like this story! I found it on comment swap and I am enjoying it so far! You are doing a great job on this story; keep it up :) I can't wait for more chapters to come out so I can get to know the story a little better! Subscribing right now!!!!

I really love this idea. There are a few spelling mistakes and I kinda got lost in the middle but found my way back. I can't wait for your next update. Thanks for entering it in my contest.

i am completely in love. please update soon!!!

I love all of the detail you use! And looking forward to updates! <3

I must say, Miss Taylor, you have truely outdone yourself. I can not wait read more. :)