While I'm not the biggest fan of All Time Low, I felt like I didn't have to be because of the way you described personalities and actions of the other members. Your grammar, spelling, and formatting of the chapters could use some work so I do recommend either editing your work or asking for help on doing it because some places it makes it hard to read because of the errors. While I'm not a big band-fic reader, I do enjoy what plot you have going on in the story so far and I will check back to see how it progresses and how your characters continue to grow and interact with one another.
December 27th, 2015 at 08:02pm